some shit i wrote about my dad/life..

[-TiM C-]

all of this shit is pretty much real.. so if your gonna critisize it, be my guest, id appreciate it.. just have good reasons. also, i wrote this shit while listening to Illmatic.. so thats how i flow it, but i guess it could be done any way.

To the Father I never knew-
times tough, no revenue, mom's outta money reduced to hittin residue..
because of you, im slangin to afford Mom's Accord..
coulda been suceedin if receivin child support..
but we never did, malevolent, maybe, by rhymes saved me..
in the streets wit feins dirty dancin like patrick swayzie..
caught a case, possesion w/ intent to distribute..
funny how you never taught me right from wrong, did you?
writin you this to tell, heaven or hell..
i'd either end up in a casket or in a jail cell, well?
words of wisdom? you mute like Hellen Keller?
sisters worried bout my future, what do i tell her?
fellas is gettin jealous, but dont know half the story..
im up late nite, hookin kids 3 for 40..
hate to see em do it, pursue it's what my preacher said..
looked him in the eyes and said all my teachers dead..
how i'm posed to beat the feds? shit done hit the fan..
forget the plan, im glad i never met this man..

:eyecross:

 

[Uaintknowin]

I M FEELIN IT


eVEN THOUGH ITS THROUGH MY OWN EYES, I CANT BELIEVE WHAT IM SEEIN/
IM WISHIN IT WAS ALL JUST LIES,WHERE IS MY FAMILY WHEN I NEED EM/
ITS SO DECIEVING HOW PEOPLE LEAVE WHEN I NEED EM THE MOST/
WE SUPOSED TO BE RELATED BUT WE AINT EVEN CLOSE/
I SAW YOU SMOKED OUT ON THE DAILY AND IT HURT ME INSIDE/
WHEN YOU SHOULDA BEEN LOOKIN OUT FOR ME YOU WAS OUT CHASIN THAT HIGH,
TRYIN TO COP SOMETHIN FOR FIVE, YOU LEAD YOUR LIFE IN A CLOUD OF SMOKE/
SPEND MY NIGHTS IN THE STREETS CAUSE THE WHOLE HOUSE SMELLS LIKE DOPE
I COULDNT COPE WITH YA CONSTANT PARANOIA/
DAMN IT IM YA SON WHY WOULD I BE TRYIN TO GET OVER ON YA/
THERES A KNOCK AT THE DOOR AND I ASK WHO IT IS/
ITS THE TASK FORCE AND CPA COMIN TO TAKE ME AND THE KIDS.....

I DONT KNOW...BUT I FEEL WHAT YOU TALKIN ABOUT....REAL CHAT MY NIGGA

 

[Big Teflon]

GOOD SHIT PARTNA......DEFINITELY FEELIN HOW YOU USED BIGGER VOCAB.....THAT IS WUT I NEED TO DO

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

why do other people posted there verses when someone is tryin to show theres? start a a new thread...


Tim.. touchin homie, i know some people that are on the same page as you with the situation.. hard times come and go playa.. make the best of it..

 

[-TiM C-]

^gracias for the input.