some rap i wrote, let me know what you think

[OS209]

This rap is horrorcore, but i thought some of you might like it since some norteno rappers like redrum and a few others rap about stuff like this.



this isn't something a weak mind can adore// but its truly something they sure as hell can't ignore// i got blood leaking on the floor// my dogs licking it up and hes fiendin for more// sick don't even describe this// some say its psychotic to slit your wrist// but it feels like a narcotic when i punch hoes with my fist// a little crazy but to lazy to commit chaos// so i bring back charles mansons cult with a seance// show you the true meaning of paranormal activity// but it will take more than an exorcist to get rid of me// ill come back as the first ghost of a ghost and strike fear in all of the west coast// ill destroy everything you love the most// im an artist but my greatest hits are in the cemetary// the titanic didn't sink i pushed everyone off the ferry// don't look in my town's garbage cans// cause you might find one of your sisters hands// she didn't meet up to my demands// she said she had a change of plans// but of course she wasn't the only one//
i took her out but not on a date// a bloody pencil to her neck was her fate// it was the last letter to her that i wrote// signed my name with the blood on her throat// i guess you could call it her deathnote//

 

[VERSACERO]

Slaughter you like canibus,make ya bitch get on the phone//

Call every minister known, so they can per sway to stop axes,from hittin ya dome//

Skarekrow,I'm the one house sitting when lucifer isn't home//

karvin verses in the skin of my foes,
with a inverted krucifix dipped in his soul//

my studio floor is covered with sickening notes//

Changed the name to relentless but I call him rimshot,cause the kid is a joke//

Ghettostar,i call em pranksters kuz his gig is a hoax//

warned him before,now they'll find him missing a his throat//

Fuck it,I might just sit in his crib wit a rope//

And wait for him to return with his kid and his ho//

Then murder the whole fam like there's scripts that he told//

Don't want to waste my time so two birds get hit with this stone//

you said my lyrics weren't the best...and this the shit that you wrote...//

its no biggie,just don't like it when peasants bitch at my throne//

but thanks a lot,now I got to add more clips to the coat and width to the hole//

And hock a bigger loogie to spit when you go//

I got cats on there 12th step like "shit he is dope"//

I'm a sick fuck like guys giving bitches dick wit a cold//

Rig my chest with explosives and sit with the pope//

Pull the fucker close and whisper...greetings its krow//

With the detonator in hand,chuckle then squeeze the shit slow//

you see i was born sick,y'all just wannabe's after reading his flow//

Got a contract with the devil get commission for every believer I choke//

and continue to work even tho I'm not needing the doe//

 

[OS209]

took it the wrong way. i said i liked your music, but that I've heard you do better. Take it how you want though i don't care. Just lose the few fans that you had, and see who the victor is. Nuff said.

 

[OS209]

oh and i never said these were any good I said "LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK." Not "hey take a look at this bro, its the shit."

 

[VERSACERO]

ha ha,I was just having fun with it, I'm not mad at all,I know you weren't dissing in your post I was writing some shit and thought I'd throw that in for fun,your verse wasn't bad.

 

[OS209]

alright then

 

[SMILEY LOCZTERO]

HERES A QUICK LIL VERSE BEFORE I GO TO BED
1./ ill never let a bitch shout,duct tape her hands,
2./stitch her mouth shut,and commense the murder plan/
x./beat her till shes tender,record her cries for my pleasure/
4./welding a knife like im jack the ripper,saving the remains 4 my daughters dinner/
5./sykotik n skarekrow aint no one fucking sicker/
6./we spit that horror shit,so go n grab your covers,knife fuck your pregnant mother,N abort your brother/