i rip-thru-hoez with vicious-blowz, comin so cold you're left with frozt bitten-toez/
you're gettin-froze by thiz varrio gilas Norteno, strapped with loadz of wicked-flowz/
my hit-lizt-growz by tha dozen but shortenz juzt tha same az i blow away my Siccness-foez/
not even a witness-knowz my level of heat, comin harder than Micheal Vick'z-throwz/
im comin real, you're comin faker than tha tyme you threatened to commit-suicide/
i keep my head up high and stand tall, you juzt a lil bytch-wit-ruined-pride/
preoccupied wit internet relationshipz, get a real-lyfe/
and if ya grow tha ballz to die, come to me, ill have ya killed-ryght/
dark blood spillz az my enemiez hit tha floor with an open-epidurmis/
you "Blow"-more-than-"Curtis", i take wannabe G'z lyke you and throw-em-in-tha-furnis/
itz tyme to wash away your mynd, ima send it thru-a-filter/
if i ever see you and your internet hoe on tha streetz, ima look at you-and-kill-HER/
ill take your fuckin dictionary away and see how you do, i mean YOU not-"Webster"/
you become a washed up bytch, while im "Tha Next Big Thing" lyke "Brock-Leznar"/
bytch ive ripped thru soggy paper towelz that were tougher-than-you/
step to me with that weak ass shyt and get duzted, motherfucker-you-loze/
suckaz-lyke-you get bombed on without hesitation/
my thoughtz are absurd, i belong in tha nut house with tha rezt of tha mental-patientz/
but im not there im here, and im ready to unleash-five/
straight out tha East-Syde, leavin Smurf'z lyfe lyke a homeless kid'z....de-prived/
been drinkin. fuck it.
you're gettin-froze by thiz varrio gilas Norteno, strapped with loadz of wicked-flowz/
my hit-lizt-growz by tha dozen but shortenz juzt tha same az i blow away my Siccness-foez/
not even a witness-knowz my level of heat, comin harder than Micheal Vick'z-throwz/
im comin real, you're comin faker than tha tyme you threatened to commit-suicide/
i keep my head up high and stand tall, you juzt a lil bytch-wit-ruined-pride/
preoccupied wit internet relationshipz, get a real-lyfe/
and if ya grow tha ballz to die, come to me, ill have ya killed-ryght/
dark blood spillz az my enemiez hit tha floor with an open-epidurmis/
you "Blow"-more-than-"Curtis", i take wannabe G'z lyke you and throw-em-in-tha-furnis/
itz tyme to wash away your mynd, ima send it thru-a-filter/
if i ever see you and your internet hoe on tha streetz, ima look at you-and-kill-HER/
ill take your fuckin dictionary away and see how you do, i mean YOU not-"Webster"/
you become a washed up bytch, while im "Tha Next Big Thing" lyke "Brock-Leznar"/
bytch ive ripped thru soggy paper towelz that were tougher-than-you/
step to me with that weak ass shyt and get duzted, motherfucker-you-loze/
suckaz-lyke-you get bombed on without hesitation/
my thoughtz are absurd, i belong in tha nut house with tha rezt of tha mental-patientz/
but im not there im here, and im ready to unleash-five/
straight out tha East-Syde, leavin Smurf'z lyfe lyke a homeless kid'z....de-prived/
been drinkin. fuck it.
and i wonder why you hate on MY shit. lol..
it actually had a few tight lines in my mind:
"itz tyme to wash away your mynd, ima send it thru-a-filter/
if i ever see you and your internet hoe on tha streetz, ima look at you-and-kill-HER/ "
^i liked that.. not sure why.. opening was pretty cool too.. rest was wack.
it actually had a few tight lines in my mind:
"itz tyme to wash away your mynd, ima send it thru-a-filter/
if i ever see you and your internet hoe on tha streetz, ima look at you-and-kill-HER/ "
^i liked that.. not sure why.. opening was pretty cool too.. rest was wack.
NOT BAD....BETTER THAN THE AVERAGE GARBAGE I READ ON HERE....IT SEEMS THAT WHENEVER SMURF BATTLES SOMEONE RIGHT AFTER THEY POST THEIR VERSE,HE CALLS IT WEAK OR PATHETIC.....I HOPE PEOPLE DON'T READ HIM SAYIN THAT AND DON'T READ THE VERSES AND DROP THEIR VOTE AGAINST HIS OPPONENT....HE DID THIS IN OUR BATTLE TOO....I THINK HE HOPES PEOPLE WILL READ HIS REMARKS AND OFF TOP THINK THE VERSE WAS BAD BEFORE THEY READ IT......NOT TO SAY FATALS VERSE WAS STUNNING EITHER....I DO BELIEVE IF SMURF COMES DECENT WITH HIS,HE WILL WIN.....BUT I'LL WAIT TIL THEN BEFORE I VOTE....
damn, i am not happy with it. dont remember poztin it either LoL. but nah smurf, im not gonna redo anything, if i loze i loze. that'z tha lazt tyme i drink and get on tha internet, that shyt iz bad, very bad. az for tha verse tho, itz not even that bad, fuck wut smurf and tim c say. if you werent feelin it, thatz koo, but i know fa sho 75% of tha foolz on here would get blown away by it.
az for you Tim, YOU have MY style (yes, it iz myne), so FUCK YOU KID.
az for you Tim, YOU have MY style (yes, it iz myne), so FUCK YOU KID.
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Rip ya heart out ya chest & hand it to you 'Here you can have this"...[This Battle?] I'd still win if i spit ten lines that didn't make'a bit'a sense 'Im greedy like purple fish"...Step-to-this, Ya STYLE AINT SHIT, eliminated defense...Drink-to-this, Ya WILD at suckan DICK, even swallow'd some piss...'VARRIO GILAS would be so proud of me"..."IM THE ONLY norteno who can tie his mongolian to the hairs of his pussy"...Ya rymes are rusty like the condoms in the sox drawer of ya dresser...My shits vile, shanken shmucks, pour salt on & lett they open wounds fester...[FUCK CATORCE] claimin ya some big veterano smobbin in ya hoopty look'a like no limit tank...Doubt it thou, [Ya Huh!] WHATEVER, even bitches start to earn rank...GILAS X4 - cows, ranchero hats, overalls &'a B-B gun...& Thas suppost to be a click who makes rivals say 'See us run"???...Thas more of a joke then a hoax pulled on aprils fools...Boast'n ya shits more heated then'a engine before it cools...Smurf's commin through rocken blue, socken ya inda jaw while whisper'n FUCK YOU....Hand ya an eviction notice & this is a notice to you, "TO: FATAL, FROM: SMURF, RENTS DUE"...
...Its the first of the month, What'cha gonna do?
Whatever thou...
& @ TRAGIC...I usualy end up saying something is wack or pathetic becuase when someone battles i have high exspektations that they gonn diss me real well...& it'll inspire me to force myself to come sick...However i wind up gettin battles like this where effort isnt a nessessity to win...
...Its the first of the month, What'cha gonna do?
Whatever thou...
& @ TRAGIC...I usualy end up saying something is wack or pathetic becuase when someone battles i have high exspektations that they gonn diss me real well...& it'll inspire me to force myself to come sick...However i wind up gettin battles like this where effort isnt a nessessity to win...
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^^^Some of my verse was in your style...I tend to do that...Ask Tim C...When i battle i duplicate whoever im battle'n...Just to show em i can come doper then em in the way they come dopest...
SIDENOTE...My battle versus & my songs i write...Are 2 very diffrent styles...
Anyone who has read both should be able to notice that instantly...
