serious Reviews= Please Help,I need the feedback 2 tracks-different styles

[hot beatz]

Siccness Folkz
I need opinions and feedback on two different rap tracks.If u feelin it pls let me know.If u hate it pls besure to smear it in my face mayn.I am humbling myself to beggar status cause I need the response.Peep em and holla at me.I know y`all be tellin it like it is so let a reppa have it!

thanx in advance
hot beatz

"paper chasin"
and "love hurtz"
both tracks written arranged and performed by kF
aka (me)
click the link and the songs should be on the page
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/kf_music.htm

 

[infamous559]

its cool i listened to da hustla song......nice westcoast style- i give it an 8/10 preety good where u from?

 

[E.Q.]

I think the songs are pretty good just for the fact that you did everything on them.Your voice and delivery kind of reminds me of Everlast.Are you trying to put together an album soon ?

 

[SIC-CITY-HUSTLA]

I would bump that for sheez...good work! Keep it up>
~TAZTWI$TED

 

[hot beatz]

Thanx y`all.I appreciate the response so far.I dont know if Im going to do an album,thats why I wanted to get peeps opinions on these tracks.Im from San jose but Im out of state right now doing production.
hotbeatz

 

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[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

i am lovin the beats.... lyrics are coo.. how much you charge for beats? good shit onthe tracks!!!

 

[hot beatz]

i dont know how much I charge for beatz u make me an offer and we could work with that.I sure do appreciate the positive feedback on my music.
hotbeatz

 

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