Round Two: Carlos Vs. FATAL NYGHTMARE Vs. JLMACN

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JLMACN

Why the fuck am I up against a chump from the K-C?/
Ya can't play-me, I'm NYGHTMARE, you just a gay-dream/
You only got to Round Two by beating the weakest-link/
Your lines is whack, gettin 'racked' like a 'piece-of-meat'/
Now your 'locked up' wit me, gettin fucked-in-the-'yard'/
I got ya ass doing the 'limbo,' straight 'duckin'-my-'bars'/
I disrupt wit a bang, like every time I pop-a-shotty-sings/
My verbs'll beat your ass like the cops-did-Rodney-King/
I suggest you step-back, or get ya fuckin chest-cracked/
& get to spittin less-raps, don't hit submit just press-Back/
U can see my flow but can't touch it like the Holy-Ghost/
Everything you drop gets knocked out, like bowling-posts/
This is our first fight, otherwise I woulda beat-ya-twice/
The only way you can win is with help from Jesus-Christ!!/

Carlos

Shit let's face~it, you're basic, I aint even gotta say-shit/
I know ya hate-this, but gotta deal with it like payments/
I murdered you in cypher, and all I did was tell-da-facts/
Check it Carlos, ya better barrow somebody else's-raps/
Cuz all you do is 'blow lines' like you was 'sniffin-crank'/
Ya saw u were against me now you wishin this-a-prank/
You got no chance of winning this, not even slim-to-none/
But this a 3 way wit all guys, that's enough for him-to-come/
So come step-to-the-beast, believe you'll be restin-in-peace/
I know you gonna throw the match but come check-in-at-least/
 
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FATAL........

you up against me cause you aint been- test-ed/
watch how i leave this joke, ver-bally-molest-ed/
me beat-this-dude, im willin-and-able/
watch your mouth-you-fruit, the siccness-is-your-label/
your-time-is-up, like your clock ran-out/
im spittin lead better-duck, your done, dont fuss-or-pout/
yea im from KC, ya better re-cog-nize/
you wanna beat me bad, call me lowercase, your cat-eyes/ (visions)
i aint even-tryin-hard, and ill still prolly-win/
you better play-your-part, and take se-cond/
how long you been here?, you aint nothing to fear/
far as im concerned, this board is the "peak" of your-career/
your done-hero, you aint as-bad-as-me/
im cold like Sub-zero, this is my-FA-TAL-ity……

Carlos....

little dude, ya better just leave while you got the chance/
you aint want it wit me, ya style is wack at a glance/
i say at a glance, cause i pay you no at-ten-tion/
you think your tight but you not , i spit you out like a luke-warm-chris-tian/
aint you the same dude thats supposed to get ass-fucked?/ you in the second round?, we know-its-all-luck/
ya-better-duck, im spitten fire, dont foreget to roll-and-tuck/
Im up-for-hire, my raps wont cost you that-much/
fuckin these 2 females, got my dick wore-out,
im done with these bitches, someone throw me a-towel.....



-JLMACN


ima edit and post carlos's....
sorry...at work..

*i didnt edit my ryhme, just want to let you know i was at work*

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visions got pissed...that you beat him...the first time.....
so he studied all night...and came back wit a better flow...

.....im just stating that....thats how bad...Fatal wants to beat me...
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lowercase said:
heaters though you killed em

vote=JLMACN
This is a hatin ass nigga right here. Aint no way he killed dude. Fatal had better punches, better metaphors, smoother flow, better multis (if you even consider jlmacns shit multis). Unless other dude comes raw as fuck Fatal got this hands down.
 
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IntenseFear said:
This is a hatin ass nigga right here. Aint no way he killed dude. Fatal had better punches, better metaphors, smoother flow, better multis (if you even consider jlmacns shit multis). Unless other dude comes raw as fuck Fatal got this hands down.
yea homie...

im not a big battle rapper...
but i try my best...im still learnin how to write..
forgive me if im not as impressive as your dude Fatal...

.....anyways....just lettin folks know...
that i edited my post...and put Carlos up there..
it not long...but it hurt...

hahaha...

Good shit Fatal...

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May 14, 2002
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everyone just votes for fatal cuz there on his nuts and hes the moderator!! im not saying your bad at all cuz you spit fire, but at the same time you have a better chance than anyone else... plus ima vote when and whenever i want
 
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BAM!

FATAL NYGHTMARE

i'm back, now it's da 2nd round Watch yo back
my goal is to win, sayin ima loose But u bout to feel my blast
so fast you'd be standin up but dead
bitches like u catch one, when u push da mind of a infer red
lyrically put ya rap shit to death and make u drop ya pen
make u do a suicide n rap by scrapin all ya lyrics wit ya pen
when i make shit happen, everybody knows im better den numba one
when u make shit happen, u was da worst and da only one
gave me yo money cuz i called u my son
compared to me in this tourny, dawg u lyrically mentally dumb
im laughin typin my shit down, i dont even call this a battle
cuz u already dead, ya lyrics cut to puzzles worse then cattle
bout to end this, make u not breathe no mo
-pop pop pop pop pop- dropped dead to da floo
beat u till u black and blue, showin u da meanin of brutality
turn ya wishes to a bullet in yo head cuz thats what u'd need
im dat 911 blast ya dont wanna get near me
cuz ya body would be puzzles, it'll be da worst tragedy

JLMACN

can't believe im battlin this punk, well get ready for pain
fuc u up it wont come out ya brain, be typin lines but u'd b thinkin of rain
ur like a disease dat i must get rid of
you bein dead on da floor is what everybody would love
so face da fact ya loosin this shit rightnow
beat u so bad, u'd be sayin it's a foul
but na i play my game right, u play ya game buh it sucks
blowin u away, by turnin yo words to dust
dont be fakin da funk, actin like u know me
ya worse den phony, ya mind needs to be teached
you'd be forever swolled inside, u could feel it in yo soul
worse den lookin at lung cancer wen i put fire ants n yo dick hole
u can say ima lil dude cuz to me u ya smalla den a midget of raps
i see u runnin yo lyrics like track, and u still aint passed one lap
so sad, i guess i had to tell u, wen it's tourny time, im winnin it all
wen u loose i'll call someone up so dey can punch u dead n da jaw
for talkin bout i was sorry when im better then u
ya thinkin dat u could win but i made u refuse
 
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lowercase said:
everyone just votes for fatal cuz there on his nuts and hes the moderator!! im not saying your bad at all cuz you spit fire, but at the same time you have a better chance than anyone else... plus ima vote when and whenever i want
Everyone votes for me cuz I'm the moderator? Is that so.... Well let's take a look at your point of view here.... I just became moderator the same day I started this tourny, and people have had me winning battles LONG before that. I've had more "enemies" on this forum than I can even recall, but somehow they had no choice but to vote for me. Oops, I guess you can throw that point out the window. Let's move on.... "im not saying your bad at all cuz you spit fire, but at the same time you have a better chance than anyone else..." Well that makes sense doesn't it? If I spit fire then I am obviously gonna have a better chance. Think before you type. And just to cap it off, you can vote "when and whenever" you want, but it only counts when you abide by my rules. I have reason to believe you are just hating, so I want an explanation of your vote. Read the rules homeboy....