Round Two: Beto Vs. Troll

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Apr 25, 2002
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- Verses due Thursday July 5th at 11:59 PM West Coast time. Anything after 11:59 will be a no-show. No exceptions.

- Votes will be accepted after both verses are posted.

- Voting will end on Saturday July 7th at 11:59 PM West Coast time. Votes made after that time will not count.

- The person with the most votes at that time wins, obviously.

- 5-0 = Automatic K.O.

- 16 bar maximum, no minimum.

- One verse a piece.

- Questionable votes must be explained.

- NO DICKRIDING or biting.

Do not post in this thread until both verses are submitted. Unnecessary posts will be deleted.

Good luck to both contestants.
 

TROLL

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Aug 8, 2003
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Ahh shiet, i know beto gonna give me a run for my money. May the best man win bro.. :cool:
as always
nothin personal, strictly lyrical..


I may come across cocky, but dont mistake me for a BETO-(pito)
IF shrekz cuzzin iz latin,they're gonna need u for the sequel-

Id beat ya wit the ugly stick, but see, god beat me to it--
your picture fitz well.... next to the meanin of lookin-stupid-

Im sure u love sac, but do u think i meant the valley??-
no love from even fat broadz.... avoidin u like balleys!!-

Flossalini good people,im sure the groupies on the jock-
but would u even know?.... or are u even one to talk??-

your rhymez next to mine, txts within mine's presence-
start resembling your style.... Obselete and DECREPID-

If im bound to die young, i want my rimz to be my age!-
ur on monster truck status and they dont make em that way!

u came across a young lad, it got vicious wit the spitz-
Im tryna make movez, your trying not to break hipz!!

ante ur ego in a battle and BET EVERY THING ON em-
you won if u bet TROLL was goin bad on em-


 
Feb 28, 2007
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TROLL said:
Ahh shiet, i know beto gonna give me a run for my money. May the best man win bro.. :cool:
as always
nothin personal, strictly lyrical..


I may come across cocky, but dont mistake me for a BETO-(pito)
IF shrekz cuzzin iz latin,they're gonna need u for the sequel-

Id beat ya wit the ugly stick, but see, god beat me to it--
your picture fitz well.... next to the meanin of lookin-stupid-

Im sure u love sac, but do u think i meant the valley??-
no love from even fat broadz.... avoidin u like balleys!!-

YOU DIDNT NEED TO SAY ANYTHING AFTER THESE 6 BARS. DDDAAAMMMNNNN!!!!! BETO ITS GONE BE HARD FOR YOU TO TOP THIS.
 
Apr 7, 2005
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TROLL said:
Ahh shiet, i know beto gonna give me a run for my money. May the best man win bro.. :cool:
as always
nothin personal, strictly lyrical..

no offense taken
it's nothin' personal like your punchlines

but one look at ya profile you can tell
troll is Tubby and be Runnin' Over to Lunch Lines

c'mon mane it's crunch time
exercise ya self, mold some of that play-doh

my rhymes cook ya like hot oil
burnin' up this Norteno Mr. Potato

more shots then a game of HALO
yeah, thats what I'm hittin' you with

give you a burial befitting of a troll
leave your ass stankin' under a bridge

I flow murderous bitch, when burnin a spliff
It's only natural I cause disasters

isn't it so hard to be hard
when a midget with a pencil up his ass, is whom your'e named after

sorry mane, I cant refrain from the laughter
you got a lot of nerve questioning if get groupies

when you're 5'5 300lbs plus
with them enormous man boobies

ya cant say a damn thang to me
kinda like a tongue tied mute

obselete and decrepid??
shit, tha's a better description of YOU

obese and abused
sounds like a topic for your debut on the Maury show

and suckin' off male quadriplegics
is the only time you've tasted vegetables

troll's tantalized by tasting testicles
he's undercover like mase and brian mcknight

in fact you can see him in the stack
dipped in black, chasin' trannies at night
 
Feb 28, 2007
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I DID A VERSE JUST LIKE THAT BUT INSTEAD IT WAS 12 BARS AND 707 TOLD ME IT WAS 24. ITS IN THE 707 VS BROWNBOY THREAD THE ONE I MADE.
 
Apr 25, 2002
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BrOwn_BoY said:
I DID A VERSE JUST LIKE THAT BUT INSTEAD IT WAS 12 BARS AND 707 TOLD ME IT WAS 24. ITS IN THE 707 VS BROWNBOY THREAD THE ONE I MADE.
You gotta learn how to count bars.

Beto arranges his bars differently than everyone else. That verse is a 16 bar verse, but yours was not.
 
Oct 16, 2006
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"obselete and decrepid??
shit, tha's a better description of YOU

obese and abused
sounds like a topic for your debut on the Maury show

and suckin' off male quadriplegics
is the only time you've tasted vegetables"


...that ended it for me, Beto took that shit!
v= Beto196