Round Two: 8FIVE8 Vs. Ironic Commando

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FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

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#1
Apr 25, 2002
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- Verses due Thursday July 5th at 11:59 PM West Coast time. Anything after 11:59 will be a no-show. No exceptions.

- Votes will be accepted after both verses are posted.

- Voting will end on Saturday July 7th at 11:59 PM West Coast time. Votes made after that time will not count.

- The person with the most votes at that time wins, obviously.

- 5-0 = Automatic K.O.

- 16 bar maximum, no minimum.

- One verse a piece.

- Questionable votes must be explained.

- NO DICKRIDING or biting.

Do not post in this thread until both verses are submitted. Unnecessary posts will be deleted.

Good luck to both contestants.
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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Dec 13, 2003
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rhyming "up" four times...a no no


i picture you perspiring-freely...cause if you desire-to-beat-me, you have to aspire-to-be-me//

instead...i left you crying-and-screaming "why are-you-peeing ...in my eyes-you're-a-meanie"//

tommorows the 4th, but tonight...im frying-up-weenies...my mouth be leaking-phosphorus//

8five8's mouth..home of the filthiest meats-and-sausages//

and i hear he eat-them-often-with...skeet-from-off-his-chin//

your lifestyle is awful-kid but if you want complex rappin-then//

fuck it..im a master-in stabbin-men with pythagorean javelins, about the head chest and abdomen//

if your flows are antibacterial...im your lyrical pathogen//

i anti-bodied him...and it didnt take-time-to-rape-minds when i "ate-five-within-eight"-lines//

i'll reach into his waist-and-takes-spines//

and rip it like a meaty hang-nail...all the way to his brain-cells//

your pain-swells...i dont need to aim-shell for you to attain-hell//

it is a shame...well...you were in need of this verbal reprimand with all the fixins' ,vocabulary and diction shittin'//

you aspirations of winning are fiction//

each and every one of your punches missin'...kept your guns from clickin//

you are right...i do be bitchin'...as in bitch slappin your face for not givin' up all your cash from trickin'//

edited for an esier read
 
S

seak

Sicc OG
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May 31, 2002
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I thought Commando's was better on every level really... flow, word play, multi's, etc.

Vote=Commando

Ironic Commando said:
tommorows the 4th, but tonight...im frying-up-weenies...my mouth be leaking-phosphorus//
8five8's mouth..home of the filthiest meats-and-sausages//
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lol... too funny.
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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Dec 13, 2003
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sawedoff0000 said:
858, his rhyme sound more battlin, ironic jus rambilin
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give examples of my "ramblings"

as it stands...3-1 585

you sound like you got it in for me...lmao!! all i did was ask you to explain. no bitchin' involved. take it easy

BTW...you sound like you didnt even read my verse...just rehashing someones eles opinion from my first battle...carry on

all i edited was the spacing of the bars so people could read them easier. i did not alter any lyrics in any shape or form

sawedoff0000 said:
dude i explaind, i thought his was more directed at you, right then in there, yours jus sounded like a written verse for a track.

this shit i thought was koo i give it to you>
instead...i left you crying-and-screaming "why are-you-peeing ...in my eyes-you're-a-meanie"//


but this shit?!? wut the fuck i aint ever even seen lee use some type of this shit

fuck it..im a master-in stabbin-men with PYTHAGOREAN javelins, about the head chest and abdomen//

u jus like spam, ppl dont know what type of meat it is, it's jus filler


i aint got it in for nobody, if i did ud know, maybe come with somethin that surprises, sometimes you jus sound like you TRYIN to b the baddest mc, instead of jus comin from the heart
man i either feel ur flow or i dont, i dont be playin that shit where i jus allways vote againt you, jus my opinion i voted and i DID READ both entries
u jus mad i aint take the time to analyze, cus it seem everytime i mention or tell u somethin u gotta come back all smart-ass



U CANT TAKE AN OPINION FROM SOMEONE WHO THINK FOR THEM SELF..................THATS UR OWN DAMN PROB YO

this dudes pm to me>>>>>>

no hard feeling

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i was bored at work and felt like starting shit with someone. none of the stuff i said was or should be taken personal. just the ebb and flow of give and go. you were a good oppontent i must say, and surprised me as you stepped up to the plate, did not back down, and visibly improved with each line
.good shit, man
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THIS HOW U WAS TALKIN, DONT TAKE IT PERSONAL RIGHT? THEN Y U ALL HURT FO'_____
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whos says im taking it personal. io just found an easy target

you are doing a good job...keep it up

i suppose i had a bigger impact on you than i initially intended. you bring up my name in completly unrelated threads in other forums. if it aint that serious...then dont take it serious....


oh yea...quote me me where i said complex

i dont write complex words....high school level at best

BTW...only big ol word i wrote in that last verse was pythagorean...which if you took geometry in high school...you should know

im not hating...im being real. i dont use "big words"
 
Legman

Legman

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Nov 5, 2002
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sawedoff0000 said:
still talkin shit, try and give u positive, i try n speak to ya real, tell u what i tought might could help
u still hate
what ever yo
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Why The Fuck Are You Givin Anyone Advice On Sum "Written" Freestyles When You Cant Put A Fuckin Sentence Together Thats Even Worth Reading

And Dont Come Talkin Shit About The Way I Type Or How I Capitalize Every Word, If You Dont Know Why I Do It By Now, Eat A Dick And Rot
 
Legman

Legman

پراید آش
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Nov 5, 2002
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sawedoff0000 said:
armen, this aint english class why the fuck u worried about
fock
how i
fock
put sentences together
fock
i aint never even seen u around, so is this dude ur bro or what this was between twoo ppl till others start steppin in
capatilize all u want, typ in japanese, or cavedrawing i dont carei aint worried how u put shit together, aslong i can undastand it ya feel me
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I Dont Give A Fuck If This Was Hell And Hitler Was Teachin Quantum Physics, If Your Gonna Tell Sumone You Cant Understand Them When Your Spellin Looks Like They Gave A Chicken Sum LSD And A Pen, Im Gonna Say Sumthing

And I Give 2 Fucks If You Seen Me Around Or Not, If Your Not Feelin How Sumone Does His Thing, Give Him Your 2 Cents, If He Doesnt Wanna Listen, Then Shut The Fuck Up

Unless Of Course Your Claimin Your Semen Already, And Feel The Need To Play Daddy
 
Legman

Legman

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Nov 5, 2002
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Your A Tough Lil Cookie Behind A Monitor You Fuckin Fruitcake

Oh, And You Must Feel So Strong Talkin Shit About Elderly Folk Huh?

Man Dont Insult Me Unless Your Sayin Shit Within Striking Distance, Otherwise Keep That Gap In Your Face Shut, Sum Words Of Advice You Bitch
 
T

TROLL

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Aug 8, 2003
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my vote for is for 858

couple of reasons..
tommorows the 4th, but tonight...im frying-up-weenies...my mouth be leaking-phosphorus//
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fuck it..im a master-in stabbin-men with pythagorean javelins, about the head chest and abdomen//

if your flows are antibacterial...im your lyrical pathogen//
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I know what phosphorus is, pathogen etc... But when you use these words as visuals especially in a battle they sound too technical...

"my raging, seething hatred, u should fear my malevolent deameanor!!-
"contaminate your soul, a pathogen like liquid cleaner!!-

corny!! make it entice the reader, not make em crack out a dictionary. its not what words you know and how u rhyme them, but its how you can use em in context to the other person and turn it into a diss.

and i hear he eat-them-often-with...skeet-from-off-his-chin//
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i didnt understand that part..

i'll reach into his waist-and-takes-spines//
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?? i thought my spine was in the back..

you aspirations of winning are fiction//
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u like to use the word aspire, but it sounds bland in this line..
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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Dec 13, 2003
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i've read your lines and wish you had more creativity, in all fairness. i have yet to be impressed with anything you've written....but this isnt about you, is it?


i am not disputing your vote. you gave sound reasons.
however,
the whole pythagorean line was set up when in response to 858 calling me complex....hence the "compexcity"

"pathogen" was in rresponce to his "antibacterial". come on people

"skeet-from-off-his-chin"
you dont know what skeet means....reallly?

ok....."he eats them often with" (filthy meats and sausages)
"skeet from off his chin" (im saying he takes frequent facials)

this is part of a chain of multies. leaking-phosphorusp,(associated with the line about frying up weenies) meats-and-sausages,(also associated with frying up weenies) eats-them-often-with
 [skeet-from-off-his-chin[/b]
this is not complex, people

i used aspire and aspirations, yes...dude rhymed "up" four times in a row

we have a lot of people with mediocre skills doing all the voting. its no wonder the flows was a ghost town before i step in lol

aight...my next rhyme will consist of your mama jokes and shooting people with internet gun.

FYI...this makes little sense

"contaminate your soul, a pathogen like liquid cleaner!!-

at least have a clear understanding of the words you use if you are going to compare that BS with what i do

this is fun

forgive the typos...im in a hurry and dont have time to edit this
 
8FIVE8

8FIVE8

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Apr 20, 2005
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Ironic Commando said:
i used aspire and aspirations, yes...dude rhymed "up" four times in a row
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I used "up" 4 times but just in different ways. Read it again, u'll see what i mean. None of them are used with the same meaning. I'm sure u've heard mc's do that before. Its whatever though
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

Sicc OG
#15
Mar 26, 2005
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@ ironic...big words dont make you ill...your rhymes are still garbage, wordplay M.I.A., multis and punches VERY basic...come on doggie dog...look at my battles dog...get an idea on how to do this...look at beto...seak...come on cuzzo
 
Stealth

Stealth

Join date: May '98
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May 8, 2002
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My vote goes to 858. More personal, better metaphors, all the words had a purpose, no filler, i was feelin it more, more natural, etc.
 
Ironic Commando

Ironic Commando

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Dec 13, 2003
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whether you like it or not...i will bring it how i bring it. i'll just have take the L each and every time. I WILL NOT BACK DOWN FROM ANY CHALLENGE...so ovarbum...show me how its done. it'll be fun..rack up another win for your record...im game.
 
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