Round 1.5: Stay High v. Beto

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Stealth

Join date: May '98
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#1
If you no-show, I will find your IP address, track you down, and kill your family. Good luck!

Verses due MONDAY NIGHT.
 
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#2
this hardended artists' rhymes will force ya show to stop-
Beto, why you postin' up fake CD covers you made on Photoshop?-
kinda look like the type to run for the border when the po-po knock-
have ya screaming "oh no, stop!" when i crush, your lines are garbage lyrical carnage leave ya body limp and tarnished in the dust-
ya frame lumped and fucked up now a harniss is a must-
lines come thru my teeth harder then your favorite artist when I brush-
i bust my nut on ya girl with distance and aim it's simple and plain you bust like a teens pimple, your lame-
got it fucked up in the game tryna test the flow-
i bet he has more cum in his stomach then in his testicles-
one swift hook to the chest ya fold, so step to me proper-
what my brain births thru my jaws makes ya feel more unsuccessful then Ben Stiller's career after Meet The Focker's-
with heat i'll defeat this jocker summon ya priest cause i'm a demon on the mic-
i was in the orgy with ya girl lastnight, and ya it was me screaming "oops, get a towel, i got some semen on this dike!"
 
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#3
I laugh at your facination with semen, son
your flow is far from demonic

shit, I bet my name in your mouth burns
like bile in an alcoholic's stomach

stay high, I'm all for it
but mane, I aint talkin' about you

said you gonna give me a swift hook to the chest huh?
is that the best your punk ass can do

potna, I maim clavicles so substancial
from which there's no hope of recovery

I'll leave you asyphixiating from my lyrics
boi, these syllables are smothering

this is an octagon, it aint a ring
so I'm a hit your ass with everything

heard you like 'em from boys to men
plus you stay all up on your bended knees

gettin driven hard like a rented jeep
admit it, that's your standard M.O.

fuck photoshop, I dont need that CD cover
to tell you this kid from Sac, Slap fire out ya dental

Leak fire out the rental
windows down, DUCK when these guns are up

hahahah....so quick to kidnap your chick
and let the homie LeeZilla fuck that slut

got the flows page growin' in her gut
ya ever seen a keystyle groupie

one that'll let you run trains on her butt
for just a few bars and a two piece

a swig of gin and a loosey
that's all it takes for a date to violate

your flow is off like an irregular period
I bet this pussy dont even menustrate





hahahahahaha.....good shit bruh bruh
 

Defy

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I gotta go with Stay High cuz Beto's flow some of them gotta be pronounced a certain way to rhyme....good shit both of y'all tho
 

FDS

RIP DUKE BROTHERS
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yeah imma say stay high got that one. Is kinda hard to say every-theeng, when im reading. i say u should spell it phenetically so we get it off tops.
 

Defy

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#10
although I do that at times in parenthesis, I'm not saying to type everything out the way you would say it, I mean, I know that if said a certain way "M.O." will rhyme with "dental" and in an actual verse (not a textual eruption) that shit would hella go, but to read it its kinda off.