RD1: OVARBMU VS FURIOUS32

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Stealth

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Okay you all know the rules. One verse a piece. Verses due Friday by Midnight. No shit talking, hair pulling, biting, scratching, kicking, running, ducking, dick-riding, bitch votes, or spitting.

Use all original verses.

PM Your opponent if you've posted up your verse already.

And voters, keep in mind who posted first and how long it took the opponent to reply.

Good luck, and fuck the no-shows.
 
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#2
i've known furious for about 2 years and this man still-a-bitch/
back down little pussy, or im gonnna ''hand you your ass'' like ventriloquists/
theres only thugs and shit in here boy, this ten milla-shit/
everything this kid say is a ''little B.S.'' like Ben Stillers-kids/
who knows how the fuck u got further than me last-time/
but saying ur thug, ya ass-lying, i can ''see though your act'' like a glass-mime/
i hit ya bitch from the back, i think i got-her-spine, shortly after i ''shoot kids'' like Columbine/
taking a photography trip through California is the only time you ever ''shot-a-9''/ (I-9)
nigga, i can kill you in anyway, homie, i tear-in-man-whores/
you'll die before i let your ''slide'' like caravan-doors/


(TURN UP THE HEAT! DONT SLEEP ON NONE OF THESE)


why this nigga rhyming? im sick-of-this/
him rappin is like when he give ''brains'', cause it dont make a ''lick-of-sense''/
i think this dude is gay-in-fact/
you'll get ''thrown round'' when i ''grab the metal'' like playin-jacks/
your face is all cut up now with your identity-scarred/
i'll find ya wife, and ''insert in the slot(slut)'' like a memory-card/
ill come around smooth, jump and beat-up-ya-homie/
ill hit you wit a ''new gun'' if you caught up in the ''heat-of-the-moment''/
 
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#3
Good luck nia, yo as is gonna need it//
You opened up yo mouth so now I gotta feed it//
Suck this dick like yo girlfriend when her ass gets me weeded//
Sicc, best believe he'll retrieve cause he got this nia heated!//

And MF you dont know me from a can of paint//
A man you aint//
When it comes to rappin fool please you cain't//

With the nerve to call me pussy, son?//
Whos the one with the cute picture of the kitty kat and toy gun//

I'm gonna go ahead and call Luke and the 2 Live Crew//
You Luke, theres a bitch living near you//
But Luke you gotta check it//
I can't read his name cause he'e fuckin dyslexic//

Is it Ovarbmu or Umbravo?...Fuck it keep it simple, Umwack//
Coming at me got you slapped and almost clapped//
Fast and furious like Skinny Black//
From start to finish your whole rap lacks facts//
Yo Umb go back to playin jacks//

Posting up garbage because you write with no heart//
Was that your verse dog or your little brother's??.. I couldn't tell 'em apart//
It was hard enough just to get past all the "quotation marks" (lmao)//

Should've kept your mouth shut, Son!//
Now you know why yo ass never gets past round one//
And a shout out to that next nia too//
Because Ovar whatever the fuck just said good bye to round two//

And yo 50 cent cover song..."Playyy yo shit, playy yo shit, playyy yo shit??"//
Nia, hell nawww that shit gets toss out with Tony Yayyyo's shit!//

Yo Stealth!//
If this nia gets one vote..find somebody else//
Cause I'm go ahead and shoot myself//

Yo Umb..heed these words//
Learn this verse//
When it comes to nightmares get ready//
Fuck Freddy//
Im your worst//
I got you family following that hearse//

See Sicc the end is near for Umb the Queer//
And ya'll can put that next to his rappin slash textin career//

Im straight checkin hoes//
First in line was the softest Florida State Seminole//
I'm the second to rhyme but ur so called punchlines are STILL horrible!!


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Vote= furious, the "quotation marks" line did it for me, umbravo's verse flowed a lil better, but some of the punchlines fell jus a lil off target for me, ive seen better from him. I see umbravo using (example/Explination) alot. word of advise, or matter of opinion, however you wanna take it: if you have to give an example or explain you rhymes; you may be reaching or trying a lil too hard for that punchline.
 
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i vote for bravo, cause that shit about it bein too complex only aplys to audio in my mind, text is what that complex shit is for
 
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thatguy said:
i vote for bravo, cause that shit about it bein too complex only aplys to audio in my mind, text is what that complex shit is for
It shouldn't even apply to audio. If you can't understand someone's complexity you shouldn't even vote or give your opinion.

My vote goes to Umbravo.
 
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FATAL NYGHTMARE said:
It shouldn't even apply to audio. If you can't understand someone's complexity you shouldn't even vote or give your opinion.

My vote goes to Umbravo.
I understood 'em, just wasn't feelin' 'em. Besides i dont think he put his best effort foward, And i'm entitled to my own opinion just like you are.
 

Stealth

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#13
Both of these verses were kinda average in my opinin (no offense). Bravo had better punches, it flowed better, and his rhymes were a little better. Furious was more direct, but his rhymes were lacking in parts, and nothing about it really stood out.

I'm gonna have to give it to Ovarbmu for this one.
 
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Thanks for all who voted (yeah, all 5 mf's lmao)....I agree...both verses lacked anything great!! They were and are wack...including mine....a subpar performance by far...but to be honest...didnt think I needed much to pull it off....Im killin next time...KILLIN!....nice grab Ovar (your ish still doesnt make sense)....lucky mf...jk....Good luck in round dos.....

None taken Stealth.....my ish was garbagio......i know i can kill at will anytime though...thats my comfort.

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