RD1: NewBay510 v. Beto916

[Stealth]

Rules are as follows:

All verses due Monday by Midnight (Cali time). [The extension is due to the fact that some of us have lives off of the internet and don't access it over the weekend].

All votes are accepted (except for those in the battle).

Whoever posts first must PM or contact their competitor to make them aware that the tournment has begun.

Good luck to everyone. Have fun. No fighting, bickering, dickriding, or sore losing.

P.S. Don't wait for your opponent to post before you reply. That's bitch.

 

[BETO916]

Battle time, round one /
Time for me to claim my victim

Metaphors and lyrical swords /
Slicin’, makin’ deep incisions

Tired of this sucka livin’ /
So let me get to terminatin’

Ready to wet this pussy like douches /
I’m twitchin’ in the bushes waitin’

And just so there’s no belly achin’ /
Let me tell you what I’m gonna do

Stick my arm on down ya throat /
And rip the guts up outta you

Snackin’ on your clavicle /
I told you I’m a beast boy

Beto’s a Nor Cal vet like Gary Payton /
Plus, I’m gunnin’ with the Heat boy

A champion, runnin’ things boy /
All that’s left for me, is the hall of fame

Stand in my way, and I’ll bust the tre’ /
then get to flashin’ like I’m Dwayne Wade

main objective is getting’ paid /
I think I told y’all once before

I’m gone of doobies, break ya up like the Fugees /
Classic, when I drop the Score

Ill metaphors, you still want more? /
C’mon mane, you don’t want it with me

As a prelude to death, I’ll scald ya flesh /
Leave it bubblin’, burnin’ from my 3rd degree

Ain’t no one here gonna stop me, B /
My rhymes are bigger then the ones you brought

At any given time, I’m runnin’ thru lines /
Like the Raiders drafted the Juggarnaut

 

[NewBay510]

metaphores aint scary, damn sure aint gonna win u dis/
shoulda cheked ur percision wit ya sword cuz all ya incisions missed/
my rhymes rate ridiculous, like u thinkin u some sort of champion/
after u lose u can start ur period, rave and rant while ur cramps begin/
im crashin in this game u aint famous, u barely local/
ill put it in a way u will understand, u beat me? holmes u must be loco/
im sippin on some SoCo while u struggle to get out my chokehold/
actin rough and so cold wen in reality he's just a joke bro/
i saw Beto on da news today, off clips from da Gay Pride Parade/
sippin a lemonade, mid-day, hand cuffed to a guy named Dave/
shit man if i knew u went that way, inspite of wat u say/
I woulda contacted that fag Tensor and had em hit up ya 2-way

 

[BETO916]

good lines mane....

metaphores aint scary, damn sure aint gonna win u dis/
shoulda cheked ur percision wit ya sword cuz all ya incisions missed/
my rhymes rate ridiculous, like u thinkin u some sort of champion/
after u lose u can start ur period, rave and rant while ur cramps begin/
im crashin in this game u aint famous, u barely local/
ill put it in a way u will understand, u beat me? holmes u must be loco/
im sippin on some SoCo while u struggle to get out my chokehold/
actin rough and so cold wen in reality he's just a joke bro/

good job

 

[NewBay510]

thanks. dunno if itll be anough. ur shit was bangin

 

[Stealth]

I think Beto had some good punches, but I was feeling NewBay's rhyme scheme more. I thought that NewBay's flowed really well in my head. I liked Beto's metaphors for the Fugees and Dewayne Wade and the Juggernaut, but they didnt punch as hard as they could have.

Im gonna have to give it up to NewBay...good job to both of you though.

Vote - NewBay

 

[BETO916]

respect....

 

[NewBay510]

fer sure.

 

[Odracir]

Beto came good and all but NewBay did it even better so my vote goes to NewBay

 

[Odracir]

wait can i even vote at all though??

 

[thatguy]

vote is for new bay, betos, yurs was good, but you didnt come at him enough, was mostly braggin, newbay u got at him in pretty much every line, so there u have it, good work both of u

 

[BETO916]

there it is...3-0 KO

good shit cuzzo.

you're right....I didn't come at him too directly....matter of fact, after reading it again, that verse could pertain to anybody.

DOH!!

 

[NewBay510]

fer sure. good battle Beto. props.

 

[BETO916]

thanks mane....keep it up

 

[Sav Scorcese]

NewBay murked him. Going second has advantages.