Ransom$ Clothing

[Kavie]

a lil someting i'm workin on for my cousin...comments/feedback...

 

[Kavie]

29 views and no feedback...

 

[King Dubb]

i like it, dont know why cats are sleepin

 

[bsleezy]

it's str8

 

[silver14209]

i like it. the "www." is kinda jaggedy. and the background doesnt flow with the text, but i like it. good work man

 

[DVS ONE]

its aight, needs to be more flashy, i dunno bout the red on red,try sum other colors to mix and match.

 

[Kavie]

the "www." is kinda jaggedy.

what do you mean by that?

 

[ConnDemned]

Clothing should be in all caps, and the url at the bottom is hard as all hell to read... and ransom$ looks goofey 'cause the dollar sign is so big it doesn't look right, since you have a script font for the ransom part that flows into the next letter and then boom the dollar sign, which doesn't flow... also the glares/stars whatever you wanna call them, are too over powering, your whole thing is black and marronish reds, and then boom here's 3 big ol' white glares jumping out atcha.... also what's this for a signature or something?

 

[Chevy Man]

i really aint feelin it...ConnDemned told u juss about everythin though..good lookin otu ConnDemned

 

[Kavie]

Clothing should be in all caps, and the url at the bottom is hard as all hell to read... and ransom$ looks goofey 'cause the dollar sign is so big it doesn't look right, since you have a script font for the ransom part that flows into the next letter and then boom the dollar sign, which doesn't flow... also the glares/stars whatever you wanna call them, are too over powering, your whole thing is black and marronish reds, and then boom here's 3 big ol' white glares jumping out atcha.... also what's this for a signature or something?

thats for that feedback folks...and its a logo that i'm workin on...the background's not gonna be in the logo, just added that incase she wanted to use it for a sig....

 

[silver14209]

i mean the www looks kinda small and makes it jaggedy. i dont know what i ment i was keed i think when wrote that. but the edges dont look smooth. maybe its the back ground. put it on some light grey maybe