this is tha first verse of a song I made called "Pray" & I was not sure if I should make this verse longer or what so can yall give me some feed back....
Dear Lord I wish I could understand you & what you have planed for me/If I get on tha right track will I begin to grow like a tree?I know Iam headen N tha wrong direction/I know I will never reach any where near perfection/But Lord I need some guidence/there'z a good person Nside this/monster who hides hiz emotionz/I know I need ta stop causing so much comotion/I need ta stop living this life of sin/Jesus I need to be born again/maybe this time I will become a better human/cuz my life aint nuttin but ruin/I know u watch me 24 7/all tha way up N heaven/all tha way above me/Lord I know you love me/but I dont know why/all I am is a bad guy/I need help/I cant do it my self/Lord I need you/I know that your tru/how can you firgive a soul that is so twisted/I know I need my soul to be re lifted/but I know I will still sin but itz basiaclly unstopable/for me to stop sinning is impossible/cuz I do it every day/but for that is tha same reason I pray/
Dear Lord I wish I could understand you & what you have planed for me/If I get on tha right track will I begin to grow like a tree?I know Iam headen N tha wrong direction/I know I will never reach any where near perfection/But Lord I need some guidence/there'z a good person Nside this/monster who hides hiz emotionz/I know I need ta stop causing so much comotion/I need ta stop living this life of sin/Jesus I need to be born again/maybe this time I will become a better human/cuz my life aint nuttin but ruin/I know u watch me 24 7/all tha way up N heaven/all tha way above me/Lord I know you love me/but I dont know why/all I am is a bad guy/I need help/I cant do it my self/Lord I need you/I know that your tru/how can you firgive a soul that is so twisted/I know I need my soul to be re lifted/but I know I will still sin but itz basiaclly unstopable/for me to stop sinning is impossible/cuz I do it every day/but for that is tha same reason I pray/