Video was cool to watch, I liked it too.
BUT-
stop with the "swagga/swagger/swag/" on any number. Shit is fucking played out in the rap game, extremely unoriginal.
And drop the auto tune/vocoder shit... it does make you sound like a man.
Beat was nice though.
Your lyrics and concepts are extremely unoriginal and not at all creative.
Plus you might wanna watch your diet and hit some sit-ups if you gonna be rockin' your belly out in the vid. On a personal level I don't mind it, but you can't sell sexy if every other chick in the game got it better than you. Lets face it, your name is Playgyrl Slim (replacing I's with Y's is also whack- but you a female so it is what it is) so the only appropriate thickness should be in your azz/tiddies.
No hate, just sharing my two cents.
Good luck.