PimpSmooth vs. Tank Locc
- Thread starter MrDontGIVEaFUCK
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IM READY BOSS PLAYAS CREW WE HERE
Battling PIMPSMOOTH, you shit will never be worthy/
""Smoke Birds"" With ""flying eagles"" next come around ill make you wear it like a ''Philly;s jersey''/ (desert eagle)
You aint LOCC CIN nigga please , this thug a softee/
Im so ""hard'' thys cat ''staying up all night'' like he drank a cup of coffee/
You sucking on our ass,dawg dont get your lips stuck/
Change your name To ''rocawear'',,, Cause ""Nas"" Tee"" always been ''stitched up''/ (Nas and Jamican shirts)
You might think off me as a Swizz beats song,, cause i stay ''hooken''of/
And this nigga claiming he'' Sick with dem bars'' but never got he's '''jail sentence tooken off'/
your rhymes are simple 'and you ""WONDER"" why you never '''PACKED BREAD'',/
Leave u on ''tubes'',,, On ''da rell' ,'' Straw'' ''burries'', When im ''hitting'' ''crack heads'/get it
Fuck lazor pointers i rather work with stashed beams/
Hate in your blood.... i ''READ YOUR EYES '', better buy a stronger bottle of VISINE/
PIMP is sickining?,, dawg get your self a coat/
I ''''TWENTY FOUR Oath''', PUT 4 Twenty Up ANd ill double with SMOKE, '''Like NIggas Dropping beer bottlesin ur projects,''' Cause im leaving you 48 BROKE""/
Stop running ur mouth about BOSS PLAYAS, ull get ur Crew flipped/
I whip cream, And push cars, while you still asking ""PUTANG PIE''' FOR A COOL WHIP''/ get IT?(pussy,pie, whip lol)
You remind me of mars, cause i got your ''store planted''//
Cause i leave thys ''NET "ce"" ,""Stiched Up"" he''ll be looking like a ''JASON KIDD AUTHENTIC/
Yo when i log- in, 1 thING u shud follow , just shut the fuck up/
cause you can ask any '''WHITE GIRL'', i leave ''BITCHES ''like you ''STUCK UP''/
Ask phoneix, ill SON you so much ill turn your father/
Nasty with tecs, fine with kaliburs, but its like ur bitch in bed, IM EASY TO REVOLV-HER/
My lines are nasty, you better '''homage those'''/ get it.
Make you switch ur corners, and have your BLACK SPOTS FALLING like a game of Domino's/
;ll let da Hose spit ill water your plants, You;re a ;HOUSE HOLD BITCH; Ill lend u '';genes'' Cause your girl ;Wearing your pants;/
Took down half da KROOKED CONCEPT squad ..How? It;s a ;''fact'' That this ;kid''; dOES not ;advance'';/
Going first, That wont work , cause no matter which way you see it your getting murked, Have god in your ;presence; like a Catholic Church/
Its over homey, I get ;''bored''; ripen threads;, thats why I stay on lurk/
Piercing you with metaphors thinking its stabbing you, Step in my circle easily overlapping you/
;verbs..; no im about action to, I handle beef and serve lunch to/
Don;t throw another punch line, if your punch line punch you/
Chrome nice, but im use to dirty weapons/
Ask A.j and free, this battle wont last another 30 seconds/
TANK LOCC u rap about da same o same o , you aint seeing a gift/
Its like your pregant, cause the ""kid"" will put a ""9 on your chest "" for being a'' bitch''/
You the type to go in da game and get nutten , while i retire with ricthcious/
Ill treat your skull like MSW documents, cause ill ''open you up with minor clitheous when i flow, every single niggas' feelin my shit
im dealin my bricks, dog i'll leave u fearin my clique
imma tell u why the crowds stay cheerin for PIMP
cause my style keep ya teeth GRINDIN' just from hearin my CLIPSE
TANK LOCC dont make my shells ~seek-in-ya-lungs~
~reachin for guns~ ill have u gaspin for air...
this niggas ~breathin is numb~
leavin red shit all over your ~SHEETS-and-your-CUM~
this metal to ya mouth is gonna have you ~'SPEAKIN IN TONGUES'~
ya flow is borin TANK LOCC, i wanna ~yawn-every-word-up~
if u cant come harder, i'll have ya Jordans lookin like strawberry syrup
i sport ~thin masks~ 2 ~spin-grasp~ ~thick-mags~ & ~rip-fags~
ya chick must be on a diet, cuz she quick to drink ~PIMP-fast~
see we aint gotta go there but if u wanna, im quick ta' freeze...
ya whole crew up like a 'BAG OF ICE', & then imma 'RIP' ya knees
eyyo its so ~sick to see~, how my dope ~LYR-ICS~ be~
so LOUD and DEADLY, its almost like u could hear it bleed
TANK LOCC, dont make my tech ~rip ya bones up~
switch ya dome up, send u and ya niggas ~quick to chomas~
my rhymes is ADDICTIVE, i know the ~TRUTH HURTS~
ill have my ~Uz' squirt~, and ~do-work~ on u ~prude jerks~
this ~faggot is lame~, u gonna make me roc my ~mag & just spray~
so u roc BULLETS on ya chest like Chris Webber ~back in the day~
have ya eyeballs where ya nose is ~POSTA' be~
u straight pussy, you and ya crew need 2 ~notice me~
TSK nigga, kid i'll make u ~choke and bleed~
all i gotta do is get two words... ~ROPE and TREE~
my crew could tie ya neck up and have u ~float and swing~
so basically, all u can do right now is ~hope and dream~
that you or anybody else on the site could ~fuck wit me~
my guns is like dicks, cause they quick 2 ~bust ya jeans~
see i dont give a fuck nigga, i pop clips till the ~gun empty~
son add up all my 9's and end up witta BUCK 50I beat every mc encountered, got em hangin themselves with modem CABLES//
frayed wires, FoF sendin shots thru ya SCREEN-SAVER/
so I decapitate TANKS DOME with records off his TURN-TABLES//
listen kid, u think u can SEE ME? BITCH//
i got more men in my SPERM than the BLOODS or the CRIPS/
u remain workin like a waiter, steady beggin 4 the TIPS//
Come on faggot, i'll kill KROOKED CONCEPTS and leave u wit NO FAN BASE//
when im thru wit u, ppl think u Nelly/
tryin 2 be kool wearin BAND AIDS//
I leave ya head in a blaze, thats the price, get off my JOCK//
I got my hand on the 9, like its 9 O CLOCK/
Ya rhymes aint tite, they loose like ya gurl TANK LOCCCROTCH//(HAHA)
If u thinkin i lost, Bitch i want a RECOUNT//
I get 9's on the landing of every DISMOUNT/
u say TANK LOCC, is MY BITCH HOW?/
MY AIM SN is GITOFFMADICK1 WOW//
So u and ya friend DONT GIVE A FUCC, go bak in yer homo JERK CIRCLE//
Why am i waistin my time, rappin against URKEL/
u only sickenin, when MR DONT GIVE A FUCC slaps on the RUBBER DICK/
and FUCKS your FAT ASS PURPLE//
How u gonna leave my BRAIN outside, this line gon make u HURL//
cuz everytime u left my brain outside/
I just go out and get my BRAIN back from ya GURL//
Battling PIMPSMOOTH, you shit will never be worthy/
""Smoke Birds"" With ""flying eagles"" next come around ill make you wear it like a ''Philly;s jersey''/ (desert eagle)
You aint LOCC CIN nigga please , this thug a softee/
Im so ""hard'' thys cat ''staying up all night'' like he drank a cup of coffee/
You sucking on our ass,dawg dont get your lips stuck/
Change your name To ''rocawear'',,, Cause ""Nas"" Tee"" always been ''stitched up''/ (Nas and Jamican shirts)
You might think off me as a Swizz beats song,, cause i stay ''hooken''of/
And this nigga claiming he'' Sick with dem bars'' but never got he's '''jail sentence tooken off'/
your rhymes are simple 'and you ""WONDER"" why you never '''PACKED BREAD'',/
Leave u on ''tubes'',,, On ''da rell' ,'' Straw'' ''burries'', When im ''hitting'' ''crack heads'/get it
Fuck lazor pointers i rather work with stashed beams/
Hate in your blood.... i ''READ YOUR EYES '', better buy a stronger bottle of VISINE/
PIMP is sickining?,, dawg get your self a coat/
I ''''TWENTY FOUR Oath''', PUT 4 Twenty Up ANd ill double with SMOKE, '''Like NIggas Dropping beer bottlesin ur projects,''' Cause im leaving you 48 BROKE""/
Stop running ur mouth about BOSS PLAYAS, ull get ur Crew flipped/
I whip cream, And push cars, while you still asking ""PUTANG PIE''' FOR A COOL WHIP''/ get IT?(pussy,pie, whip lol)
You remind me of mars, cause i got your ''store planted''//
Cause i leave thys ''NET "ce"" ,""Stiched Up"" he''ll be looking like a ''JASON KIDD AUTHENTIC/
Yo when i log- in, 1 thING u shud follow , just shut the fuck up/
cause you can ask any '''WHITE GIRL'', i leave ''BITCHES ''like you ''STUCK UP''/
Ask phoneix, ill SON you so much ill turn your father/
Nasty with tecs, fine with kaliburs, but its like ur bitch in bed, IM EASY TO REVOLV-HER/
My lines are nasty, you better '''homage those'''/ get it.
Make you switch ur corners, and have your BLACK SPOTS FALLING like a game of Domino's/
;ll let da Hose spit ill water your plants, You;re a ;HOUSE HOLD BITCH; Ill lend u '';genes'' Cause your girl ;Wearing your pants;/
Took down half da KROOKED CONCEPT squad ..How? It;s a ;''fact'' That this ;kid''; dOES not ;advance'';/
Going first, That wont work , cause no matter which way you see it your getting murked, Have god in your ;presence; like a Catholic Church/
Its over homey, I get ;''bored''; ripen threads;, thats why I stay on lurk/
Piercing you with metaphors thinking its stabbing you, Step in my circle easily overlapping you/
;verbs..; no im about action to, I handle beef and serve lunch to/
Don;t throw another punch line, if your punch line punch you/
Chrome nice, but im use to dirty weapons/
Ask A.j and free, this battle wont last another 30 seconds/
TANK LOCC u rap about da same o same o , you aint seeing a gift/
Its like your pregant, cause the ""kid"" will put a ""9 on your chest "" for being a'' bitch''/
You the type to go in da game and get nutten , while i retire with ricthcious/
Ill treat your skull like MSW documents, cause ill ''open you up with minor clitheous when i flow, every single niggas' feelin my shit
im dealin my bricks, dog i'll leave u fearin my clique
imma tell u why the crowds stay cheerin for PIMP
cause my style keep ya teeth GRINDIN' just from hearin my CLIPSE
TANK LOCC dont make my shells ~seek-in-ya-lungs~
~reachin for guns~ ill have u gaspin for air...
this niggas ~breathin is numb~
leavin red shit all over your ~SHEETS-and-your-CUM~
this metal to ya mouth is gonna have you ~'SPEAKIN IN TONGUES'~
ya flow is borin TANK LOCC, i wanna ~yawn-every-word-up~
if u cant come harder, i'll have ya Jordans lookin like strawberry syrup
i sport ~thin masks~ 2 ~spin-grasp~ ~thick-mags~ & ~rip-fags~
ya chick must be on a diet, cuz she quick to drink ~PIMP-fast~
see we aint gotta go there but if u wanna, im quick ta' freeze...
ya whole crew up like a 'BAG OF ICE', & then imma 'RIP' ya knees
eyyo its so ~sick to see~, how my dope ~LYR-ICS~ be~
so LOUD and DEADLY, its almost like u could hear it bleed
TANK LOCC, dont make my tech ~rip ya bones up~
switch ya dome up, send u and ya niggas ~quick to chomas~
my rhymes is ADDICTIVE, i know the ~TRUTH HURTS~
ill have my ~Uz' squirt~, and ~do-work~ on u ~prude jerks~
this ~faggot is lame~, u gonna make me roc my ~mag & just spray~
so u roc BULLETS on ya chest like Chris Webber ~back in the day~
have ya eyeballs where ya nose is ~POSTA' be~
u straight pussy, you and ya crew need 2 ~notice me~
TSK nigga, kid i'll make u ~choke and bleed~
all i gotta do is get two words... ~ROPE and TREE~
my crew could tie ya neck up and have u ~float and swing~
so basically, all u can do right now is ~hope and dream~
that you or anybody else on the site could ~fuck wit me~
my guns is like dicks, cause they quick 2 ~bust ya jeans~
see i dont give a fuck nigga, i pop clips till the ~gun empty~
son add up all my 9's and end up witta BUCK 50I beat every mc encountered, got em hangin themselves with modem CABLES//
frayed wires, FoF sendin shots thru ya SCREEN-SAVER/
so I decapitate TANKS DOME with records off his TURN-TABLES//
listen kid, u think u can SEE ME? BITCH//
i got more men in my SPERM than the BLOODS or the CRIPS/
u remain workin like a waiter, steady beggin 4 the TIPS//
Come on faggot, i'll kill KROOKED CONCEPTS and leave u wit NO FAN BASE//
when im thru wit u, ppl think u Nelly/
tryin 2 be kool wearin BAND AIDS//
I leave ya head in a blaze, thats the price, get off my JOCK//
I got my hand on the 9, like its 9 O CLOCK/
Ya rhymes aint tite, they loose like ya gurl TANK LOCCCROTCH//(HAHA)
If u thinkin i lost, Bitch i want a RECOUNT//
I get 9's on the landing of every DISMOUNT/
u say TANK LOCC, is MY BITCH HOW?/
MY AIM SN is GITOFFMADICK1 WOW//
So u and ya friend DONT GIVE A FUCC, go bak in yer homo JERK CIRCLE//
Why am i waistin my time, rappin against URKEL/
u only sickenin, when MR DONT GIVE A FUCC slaps on the RUBBER DICK/
and FUCKS your FAT ASS PURPLE//
How u gonna leave my BRAIN outside, this line gon make u HURL//
cuz everytime u left my brain outside/
I just go out and get my BRAIN back from ya GURL//
I didn't read the end cuz it was so long. I got my good points and my bad points. You had a good flow, you had good word play, multis, etc. However...I had no idea what the majority of your metaphors were about. They really didn't make a whole lot of sense to me in some areas, and in other areas they seemed a little too far-fetched. Overall, i thought it was a good rhyme, and if Tank Locc doesn't spit better, u'll have my vote.
I'm curious to see how Tank Locc does.
I'm curious to see how Tank Locc does.
lcm bpc and ill style damn who can stop that lmao
u ovious can tell no 1 cares on ur habring havok shit lcm illstyle or lcm we pass u fools up ur time have camebut now u want 2holla lmao we laughing at u niggas we done ate u fools up move on u cant fucc wit us lol u can see none of us read that shit lol cuz u broke ass niggas want2 come at the best but u not worthy an dif lee reads this he will say the same thang u fools dont want it wit us trust me
u ovious can tell no 1 cares on ur habring havok shit lcm illstyle or lcm we pass u fools up ur time have camebut now u want 2holla lmao we laughing at u niggas we done ate u fools up move on u cant fucc wit us lol u can see none of us read that shit lol cuz u broke ass niggas want2 come at the best but u not worthy an dif lee reads this he will say the same thang u fools dont want it wit us trust me
-Im the 1 man regime and itz time for CALICO to takeover/I brutally beat 420 pimps smoothly/then send em' to Geraldo for a makeover
-Unlike ya apartment complex/I definitely got heat/
Im the realest in rhymin/ you just crossover like NBA street
-Ya best know/that if I take a trip to Modesto/
Im puttin you in gourney/and leavin wit ya white and Cali ain't even got snow
-Pimp smooth?!!! please!!!/die quick cause all you mackin' is big chicks/you claim you spittin bars/they lookin more to me like sticks
-You could yoga on ya XBOX and still wouldn't be on top of ya game/I told ya b*tch to think smart/and the heffer gave me some brain
-I stick my foot in ya azz/take you to a desert(ya mouth'll be dry)/and have you spit shinin' my shoes/in CALI i pack 16 9's(916)/in DC I pack nuttin but 22's(202)
-Once I register/you n*ggaz better call AETNA/
and get a Tetna for ya Retna/ cause I move packages like Tetris
WWW.CALICO.8M.COM
-Unlike ya apartment complex/I definitely got heat/
Im the realest in rhymin/ you just crossover like NBA street
-Ya best know/that if I take a trip to Modesto/
Im puttin you in gourney/and leavin wit ya white and Cali ain't even got snow
-Pimp smooth?!!! please!!!/die quick cause all you mackin' is big chicks/you claim you spittin bars/they lookin more to me like sticks
-You could yoga on ya XBOX and still wouldn't be on top of ya game/I told ya b*tch to think smart/and the heffer gave me some brain
-I stick my foot in ya azz/take you to a desert(ya mouth'll be dry)/and have you spit shinin' my shoes/in CALI i pack 16 9's(916)/in DC I pack nuttin but 22's(202)
-Once I register/you n*ggaz better call AETNA/
and get a Tetna for ya Retna/ cause I move packages like Tetris
WWW.CALICO.8M.COM
if u could write it wouldn't be such a problem readin your shit.
LMAO
remind me of a retard on the keyboard. your shit doesn't make sense....
"i sport ~thin masks~ 2 ~spin-grasp~ ~thick-mags~ & ~rip-fags~ "
(thin masks to spin-grasp?????)
"PIMP is sickining?,, dawg get your self a coat/
I ''''TWENTY FOUR Oath''', PUT 4 Twenty Up ANd ill double with SMOKE, '''Like NIggas Dropping beer bottlesin ur projects,''' Cause im leaving you 48 BROKE""/ "
(^im surprused u can even add....but wtf does it have to do with being broke....."48 broke????")
lol theres way to many to copy and paste. your garbage. only way you could win is thru a DQ.
LMAO
remind me of a retard on the keyboard. your shit doesn't make sense....
"i sport ~thin masks~ 2 ~spin-grasp~ ~thick-mags~ & ~rip-fags~ "
(thin masks to spin-grasp?????)
"PIMP is sickining?,, dawg get your self a coat/
I ''''TWENTY FOUR Oath''', PUT 4 Twenty Up ANd ill double with SMOKE, '''Like NIggas Dropping beer bottlesin ur projects,''' Cause im leaving you 48 BROKE""/ "
(^im surprused u can even add....but wtf does it have to do with being broke....."48 broke????")
lol theres way to many to copy and paste. your garbage. only way you could win is thru a DQ.
we r ready how about u lol bpc runs this
blah blah blah u just mad i ripped u shudda up im tired of u talking man fo real shut up go ina chat room lmao damn u funny u have no skills battle some 1 closee 2 ur range cuz i neva seen or hear us pit and if u do i pay it no mind fo real u have no lines u a rookie 2me lmao damn give it up we run this shit
blah blah blah u just mad i ripped u shudda up im tired of u talking man fo real shut up go ina chat room lmao damn u funny u have no skills battle some 1 closee 2 ur range cuz i neva seen or hear us pit and if u do i pay it no mind fo real u have no lines u a rookie 2me lmao damn give it up we run this shit
i know,.,..,
i know this shit with wanna b pimp 420 (like hes smokin anything but himself in his own copy/paste rhymes) but man u a fuckin busta pimpsmooth go home and since ur in ur dictionary so much i want u to report back to class with the def. for these ten words...
1.orignal
2.FAKE
3.Wanna-be
4.better
5.luck
6.next
7.time
8.pimp
9.smooth
10.420
when ur done ill give ya a ride ta skoo
i know this shit with wanna b pimp 420 (like hes smokin anything but himself in his own copy/paste rhymes) but man u a fuckin busta pimpsmooth go home and since ur in ur dictionary so much i want u to report back to class with the def. for these ten words...
1.orignal
2.FAKE
3.Wanna-be
4.better
5.luck
6.next
7.time
8.pimp
9.smooth
10.420
when ur done ill give ya a ride ta skoo