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Oct 21, 2002
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my bad for talkin shit the last time i did this but heres some new shit so peep and let me know your oppinion

im a war machine like sylvester stallone
rollin up dank that smells better than cologne
rivals couldnt fade me if i was def rappin on the phone
suckas couldnt scare me if they whole crew called me out and i was all alone
like snitches your so called homeboys turn into bitches and they tru colors get shown
like goin to heaven or hell my dirt stays unkown
i punk muthafuckas to do what they dont wanna like i was influential
like you hide your bad habbits cause everybody has to have it we all act credential
the same way i pull liks i pulltricks keep my bizniss confidential
me without rymes is like a world without crimes im essential
tryin to take my life is mission impossible and if possible
new clothes and jewlery wouldnt be flossible
and hoes wouldnt be tossable
i make you feel my lyrics like a handshake
i fuck up your hood like an earthquake
i have you doin wrong like in the winter wearin sandles
blowin blunts like birthday candles
i thought you knew i got handles

thas all folks let me know what yall think since noone liked my last one tell me if i improved my style at all
 
May 14, 2002
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Its aight....let it flow together more....less of a break in the end of the line...if yah get what im sayin...
not to shabby though
 
Oct 21, 2002
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dickryding locsta-60 doesnt wanna battle

can u spit it les battle d loc set it up and les battle like some real emcees im callin yo punk ass out so dont stay quiet you lil hoe i see all you do on this site is hate on emcees so les do this
 
Apr 26, 2002
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Bacc In Texas
#8
DAMN


LMFAO!!!

Mr.D-Loccsta... stop tappin on them youngsta's emotions!!!















































GO HEAD CUZZ.........DEDICATE YOUR TIME, ENERGY AND MONEY INTO D-LOCC.......
MAKE A RECORD ABOUT ME.
I DONT SPIT FLOWS=I DONT GIVE A FUCC!
YOU ARE OF NO CONCERN TO D-LOCC.
WORD FROM THE WISE....
~dont ask a question, if you dont want the TRUTH~
YOU MAY NOW HAVE THE LAST WORD....

 
May 10, 2002
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yo stealth bann this faggot...

killapsmkinable, take it like a fuckin man...ur spit was decent...but now i couldnt give a shit about it....ur a fuckin punked out bitch who prolly dont even Cmoke weed or get his drink on...when u do some of the shit u rhymn bout hit me back...and why u trin ta battle everyone? shit u suck the way it is why go down even more?...enter urself in the battles thread at the top yo screen and if ur lucky u can battle me...so i can show u how ta do it