PEEP(feedback)

[x-kalibur]

I posted this shit up here cause I got no responces from the flows section so get me some feedback on if its ok or whatever.

Wasnt even lookin for no trouble//
I was just walkin//
had no problems until you opened your mouth and started talkin//
black bandanna wrapped around my head got you talkin non-sence//
if I catch you alone I'ma prove I was born with out a consience//
approachin me 3 niggas deep//
so I had to remain silent//
look you straight in the eyes on the street//
next time it'll be more violent//
I wasnt out lookin for enemies//
they came and found me//
heard about your mark ass jackin little kids that live around me//
I aint havin it so next time I'm foreal bringin somethin in my pocket//
leave all 3 bleedin but it aint a gun so I dont gotta cock it//
cut you deep as hell//
make sure you feel it son//
make damn sure you kill me if you ever point a gun//
if you shoot by the time I heal you better be leavin//
I know where you sleep and I'ma be stoppin your breathin//

 

[JIM HAT]

i like it... and you should fix your sig..

 

[x-kalibur]

the sig wont pop up

 

[JIM HAT]

put

after it..

 

[x-kalibur]

alright lets see

 

[x-kalibur]

testing.....

 

[JIM HAT]

yupp

 

[JIM HAT]

its kinda big ha

 

[x-kalibur]

thanks bro

 

[CHRISHOGGALYPSE]

it was decent, ain't really sayin too much. i know its hard to say some stuff that we ain't all heard before, that's what sets the best among the rest if you can distinguish your raps from the rest of the games.

 

[x-kalibur]

thanks chrisdogg14 appriciate the feeback

 

[CHRISHOGGALYPSE]

DON'T MENTION IT, I WOULD HOPE THAT YOU WOULD EXTEND THE SAME COURTESY EVEN THOUGH I DIDN'T PUT YOUR NAME ON THE RAP I PUT DOWN ON HERE. STAY UP AND WIT IT MAN.