ot: new song, feedback?

[Rezin]

Thinkin bout makin this a single for my upcoming project but just want peoples feedback first.
This is the first place I've posted this so I'm not tryin to spam up the board or anything just want your guy's opinions.

Any good/bad feedback is welcome. Tell me what I'm doin wrong/right.

I'm first and last verses.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/746884672d064c1d/

 

[Raul lVl. XIV]

good beat and lyrics. try to change up the chorus a lil bit its kind of repetitive. the timing of some of the bars are kind of spacey try to make it flow better. nice job tho overall

 

[StrangeStatic]

sounds good, like the beat, but i just wasn't feeling it. Kinda sounded repetitive. Sorry & shit

 

[Rezin]

Thx for the feedback guys. Yeah I'm usually a fan of more complex choruses too but this is just a party track so I was goin for more of a repetitive chorus so it would stick lol.

 

[Madison Kaine]

I would certainly work with you. I like the song.

 

[Rezin]

I would certainly work with you. I like the song.

Yeah man I'd be down to lay a track down with ya too. That fuckin hoes song sounded nicee. Thx though.

 

[Rezin]

Anyone else give it a listen?? I put it streaming now so u dont gotta d/l it..

 

[PoetiCCC]

not really my type of tracc....like dude said tho....your flow sounds a lil choppy in places and there were a few places where you didnt really enunciate your words very well and kinda slurred a lil bit....lyrics are a little bit simplistic for my tastes but I've heard much worse from independent artists....like i said I dont really dig party musicc too much but this is a cool lil song for whut it is....keep grindin homie....~2`

 

[Rezin]

Thanks 4 the feedback. Yeah I don't really like party music much either but you know how it is... gotta get some diversity on this mixtape, I been doin too many serious songs....