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first the lyrics is just really hella like average...like it just one long freestyle, cause that what it sounds like, i couldnt tell if this track was for real or not..but i think it is.
I mean the lyrics are really just hella simple...simplistic like...dick shit bitch hit fuck nut bust just dead read head world girl hoe go though know silly feel me....basic rhymes, like something wrote in 20 minutes or just off the dome...
maybe thats just you...i aint a rapper but i know good music, and i just dont feel your ready to be tryin to drop a tape yet, you need to work on delivery and timing, and find your style...your inner and outer voice...you got kinda a coo voice you just gotta learn to use it blood
i wasnt feelin the new song at all, if i was screening it to be featured on a album...you wouldnt get a call back from me. it just didnt sound like you put that much effort into it, you didnt really TRy and be creative or different, you basically imitated something you heard before.....
and you mentioned pimpin....a lotta cats holla pimpin in they songs and they aint pimpin...remember to keep it real, unless you got hoes on the track bringin you bread from fuckin and sellin that pussy then dont holla pimpin blood cause you aint pimpin...you might be doin ya thang but that aint pimpin
i'd say this was a weak freestyle at most.....come again wit some thin more creative dogg, tell me what ya about wit ya music, what ya been through, ya ya REALLY doin cause it aint pimpin dogg, just cause you spittin to a black bitch wit a fro (that mic) and sayin what you want to her and she dont say shit back dont mean you pimpin dogg....i mean shit...im just bein real...you asked for it
man let me hear the real you.....dig deep, let me hear some REAL music
unless you aint able to do that...then music might not be for you
I mean the lyrics are really just hella simple...simplistic like...dick shit bitch hit fuck nut bust just dead read head world girl hoe go though know silly feel me....basic rhymes, like something wrote in 20 minutes or just off the dome...
maybe thats just you...i aint a rapper but i know good music, and i just dont feel your ready to be tryin to drop a tape yet, you need to work on delivery and timing, and find your style...your inner and outer voice...you got kinda a coo voice you just gotta learn to use it blood
i wasnt feelin the new song at all, if i was screening it to be featured on a album...you wouldnt get a call back from me. it just didnt sound like you put that much effort into it, you didnt really TRy and be creative or different, you basically imitated something you heard before.....
and you mentioned pimpin....a lotta cats holla pimpin in they songs and they aint pimpin...remember to keep it real, unless you got hoes on the track bringin you bread from fuckin and sellin that pussy then dont holla pimpin blood cause you aint pimpin...you might be doin ya thang but that aint pimpin
i'd say this was a weak freestyle at most.....come again wit some thin more creative dogg, tell me what ya about wit ya music, what ya been through, ya ya REALLY doin cause it aint pimpin dogg, just cause you spittin to a black bitch wit a fro (that mic) and sayin what you want to her and she dont say shit back dont mean you pimpin dogg....i mean shit...im just bein real...you asked for it
man let me hear the real you.....dig deep, let me hear some REAL music
unless you aint able to do that...then music might not be for you