Nothin But A Bitch (Freestyle Verse)

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Dirty Shoez

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You talkin that shit...but ya'ont really want it wit T
Yo ass must be hindustani--you 'on't want no beef
And you already in the desert--you don't want no heat
Ill put my fist to ya dome....You ain't tryin to hear me?

Then check this..i'm about to make you listen to the chrome
Put a slug in ya mug...you got slime in ya thermus
9 to ya epidermis...why you playin with this?
Nortenos...Bloods..Crips all parlayin to this

You throw yo set up, ill knock you down, right where you stand
And wit my right hand, i'm smackin up ya right hand man
You shoulda heard what i mentioned to y'all...wit one sentence
You fall...I stomp in the summer and lynch in the fall

And if you ever think to mention you ball...
You better tuck in chains...take off watches...I already been where you are
...I'll find where you stay...and you a chump
You nothin but a bitch, Holmes--you remind me of Kate...





One of those verses I wrote and memorized, but never got around to recording. For what its worth, this was written in 2003. Not too outdated at all.
 
Stealth

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I'm not gonna clown you, cuz you took the time to write a verse, which is cool.

But to say that you're better than 99% of the board after posting up garbage like that is funny to me.

(A verse you wrote and memorized 3 years ago is not a "freestyle")
 
Dirty Shoez

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Stealth said:
I'm not gonna clown you, cuz you took the time to write a verse, which is cool.

But to say that you're better than 99% of the board after posting up garbage like that is funny to me.

(A verse you wrote and memorized 3 years ago is not a "freestyle")
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"Garbage"? Come again? You can't think of anything specific? Or is it that you don't really know shit about shit, so RECOGNIZING a problem, issue, or situation isn't possible in the first place?

What say you, champion? Too many syllables in a line? Bad rhyming words? Bad vocabulary choice? Speak up. Not a "song-friendly" verse? You're really sounding like a spiteful bitch right now.


Friends.....I'm sensing a little bit of jealousy here. I always take time out to break down other people's rhymes, and not use their threads as an opportunity to talk shit and carry on vendettas.....so what's really?

I know it seems unfair that most great rappers aren't well-educated, and most well-educated people can't rap in the first place, and here, I'm good at both.....but that's life. Suck it up and deal with it.
 
Dirty Shoez

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By the way....

Stealth said:
(A verse you wrote and memorized 3 years ago is not a "freestyle")
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Any verse you write is technically a freestyle. It is even MORE SO a freestyle if the verse is the only thing on the paper, with no chorus or bridge or intro or outro to go with it.

A more accurate name for it is "prestyle". The same goes for "keystyle"--a text freestyle.

I know all of these things and more, sport. And you will be hard-pressed to find rappers OUTSIDE OF THE SICCNESS (NOTORIOUS for dick-riding) that disagrees.
 
Stealth

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What I did say was that I wasn't gonna clown you. Give you props for at least posting something. If I critiqued your verse it would get torn apart on the basis of it being a mockery of real rap music, and you'd just assume I was hating on you.

A more accurate name is "a pre-written rhyme falsely identified as a freestyle".

Go do your thing, friend. But I really doubt my opinion would affect your deluded sense of self-worth, so why waste my time?
 
Dirty Shoez

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By all means.....tear it apart. Like i said, it's 3 years old and it ain't going nowhere.

Don't do it for me, do it for the forum. I'd love to see your great analysis. We all know you're going to do nothing but whine about the subject content ("You shouldn't be rapping about such and such, because you're a this and not a that!"), because the rhymes are solid.
 
DAT NIGGA TAZZ

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its not the rymes thats tha problem, its the shit ur talkin about its sounds fake. you could say that you be shootin niggas in theyre epidermises, and your puttin slugs in yo mugs, but nobody is gonna take it serious. and shit like "slime in ya thermos"... wtf kinda shit is that? that dont make sense... and nortenos crips and bloods aint parlayin to yo shit theyre parlayin to some shit in another state...

u need to rap about school or something
 
CHRISHOGGALYPSE

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Well, it's good to see that you actually posted up something. There were a couple of decent lines in there, but nothing staggering to me. I don't see your point on saying that any verse is a freestyle. I think the entire world would disagree with you on that one. That's why a lot of punchlines in FREESTYLE battles have a lot to do with having written something before being on the stage, because that isn't a freestyle. But hey, not here to argue. I honestly think you're feelin yourself a lil too much though, but then again most rappers are. Keep doin your thing
 
Dirty Shoez

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Any verse that is not part of a song is a Freestyle. Point blank period. Just like Running is Running (slower is Jogging, faster is...Running), and Eating is Eating (small meal = snack, bigger meal = eating)............Freestyling is Freestyling.
 
Dirty Shoez

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Elaborate, sport. I dare you. We'll all discuss it here, then go to a good 5 other hip-hop boards and ask. You will be suprised by what happens, but I won't be. I'll point back to that quote and it will hold up.

At the end of the day, week, month, or whatever.....I am right. And you, like so many others here, are just a guy who is often 'right by default' because you bully others into dropping their argument, no matter how shitty your own is.

Not happening here.
 
Stealth

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How bout instead of me critiquing your piece of shit, we just battle each other? Ohhh that's right...you don't reply to actual battle raps, only conversation.

Congratulations on showing up to the Flows Forum...the only site on the Siccness that hasn't banned you...yet.
 
Dirty Shoez

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If you want a battle, ask for a battle ahead of time. If you just go and record a diss track out of nowhere, then be prepared to wait until that person feels like responding.


And, again, if anybody has problems with my definition of a Freestyle, then accept one of my fucking challenges for once. What the are you all so afraid of anyways? That outside of Siccness dick-riders, everyone else is going to think you're some fucking idiots that don't know shit about rapping?

And you wonder why people no-show and spit in the faces of their competition. Most people here are just loud mouthed pricks that hate to be wrong and hate to lose, but love to have someone co-sign their ridiculous bullshit.
 
J.G@tz

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Damn!!! not only are you an asshole of a person, you are also a horible rapper. I mean you really do suck.
i wouldnt even come at you like that if you wern't such an asshole.


Now i really see that there is no reason to even acknowledge your exsistance, and i advise beto and stealth to do the same, peace.
 
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