NOBE-KILLIN' EM (SHORT FILM/MUSIC VIDEO)
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Honest feedback: It lacked originality, but creative none the less. On the editing, I felt it took too long on the scene where your sitting shotgun spitting your verse and driving through the tunnel etc. Your still spitting your verse, yet taking a drag off the cigarette at the same time. I say, lose the cigarette because it doesn't add any value to the video. On the contrary, it takes away from it. I just felt as a viewer, that the scene could of used editing to where you could of cut to different scenes rather than to have the camera on you as you spit your whole verse. I understand that you may want the attention on you so the viewer can see your expression to get the feel, but it rarely works on film if ever.
Second, please lose the subtitles. It distracts the attention away from the video as the music plays & the subtitles flash a little too fast (or seemed that way in the first view) where it reaches a point to where I just felt like turning it off due to the fact that I was focused on the music & trying to read at the same time. You just had too much going on right there IMO.
I don't mean to sound negative, but I'm seriously coming in with constructive criticism on what I felt needed change to make run smoother.
Great intro and good acting. The song is good IMO. Props Breh!
Second, please lose the subtitles. It distracts the attention away from the video as the music plays & the subtitles flash a little too fast (or seemed that way in the first view) where it reaches a point to where I just felt like turning it off due to the fact that I was focused on the music & trying to read at the same time. You just had too much going on right there IMO.
I don't mean to sound negative, but I'm seriously coming in with constructive criticism on what I felt needed change to make run smoother.
Great intro and good acting. The song is good IMO. Props Breh!
i thought the same thing "is that a real black eye?" lol if it is you did a good job on putting a twist on it for a video! the way i see the tunnel part it looks like a camcorder raw shot so i dont expect no edit cuts back and forth on that part.it made the footage look more real. can dig it mayne not just the black eye part the whe video.its real creative for a video on a budget.keep it up.
