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[onewaymuzik]

I let thoughts burn like sulfuric acid through ya skin tissue
bubble off the top a da dome death rep n still diss u
so of course u think u gettin off by dissn me
we to raw u fall apart like muscular distrophry
see me in the streets or on beats u still get delt
fuck internet battle boards cuz the delivery cant be felt
fuck what I Mean.! you touch the screen and ill make u melt
yall over wrong
spit kid shit like pokemon
and way 2 fake like a blonde farahkan
demo deal strap c-4 around the chest in your buildin
fuck the mobb i kill u plus women and children
movie drama and ask ya mom fa sexual healin
yall bi coastal hatin like elton john hates the pussy
waitin for answer like cancer tryin 2 push me
yall see reality through bars n a cut in choke hold
drop vocals
keep shit gold like acipocco
only the dope know
we gon shine in the booth
i got the army fatiges on consignin ya troops
bombist regardless we gon ride 4 da truth
and all u cats inthis game.yall gon die 4 ya loot
we procede wit the glits n the game
keep it simple n plain
crack ya skull n drop sum shit on ya brain

What chall think gimmie some feed back

 

[Lady Lane]

HONEST OPINION

Well, I like this verse! You had good word play and everything rhymed. You used Meta4's up the ass and you were VERY creative. Your right It is hard to really tell if shit flows on the battle board since you can't relate with the delivery of it. But I can tell that shit flows good! The opening of this verse was the shit! And you ended it lettin nigga's know what's up.....Cool verse homie!

 

[onewaymuzik]

Thanx for the opinion good lookin
Out
509 Spokane East of the cascades