New Tracks - Feedback Needed/Welcome!!

[Hihlosis]

I got a couple tracks I need some feedback on. I've uploaded 4 songs (3 written, 1 freestyle) for the Sicc to peep out. Please leave some feedback, there are alot of good ears on this site. I appreciate it!

Think First (A song for my daughters)
http://www.divshare.com/download/4720141-aab

Fuck It Too (1st studio recording)
http://www.divshare.com/download/4720166-2e6

Player Hits (All around hit)
http://www.divshare.com/download/4720204-df5

She Made Hooves ft. Lowskee (Freestyle)
http://www.divshare.com/download/4720239-bc6

 

[NiNe2FiVe]

I wish I had 2 more hands so i could give those songs...FOUR THUMBS DOWN!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!



















j/k
Player Hits was pretty good 3.5/5
Fuck it Too bored me 1/5
Think First was Mediocre 2.5/5
She Made Hooves was kinda cool 3/5

 

[Hihlosis]

imma be real with u & will ALWAYS give constructive critisicm.


track one. which is THINK FIRST... concepts dope. u got writing skills. u need to practice more with your voice & how to make it marketable. the beat is garbage & it sounds like youre rapping in a tin can. go to a REAL studio & stop recording at home. the songs getting boring about 1/2 way thru because u cant tell when the hook comes in (if one comes in)... if not.... u need to put one in. u need to experiment with over dubs & mixing so u can distinguish between the verses & hooks. & u also need to focus on RAPPING & not READING. sounds like youre reading. but u still got some writing talent man. thats real.

FUCK YOU TOO: intros an awesome choice! hahaha. this is really boring. quality is SLIGHTLY better than the 1st, but still sounds pretty bad. this again - sounds like youre reading. u sound like a writer, not a rapper. song was so boring, i didnt play the whole thing. production was horrible. get some better beats

PLAYER HITS: like the Short dog throw back sounding. again. bad quality. beats cool but your flow is hella repeatitive.... again.... cant tell the difference between the verses & hooks. only reason i knew there was a hook is cuz u said VERSE TWO.... so... :shrug:

SHE MADE HOOVES: trying to understand what the intro was.... the beat was kinda cool... but your verse ruins the song. sorry to say it, but its true. very boring. i listen to song 1 & 3 all the way thru. but this & song two, i had to turn off.


if these are your 1st four songs u ever recorded.... thats good shit.... keep practicing & u only gonna get better. but focus on expressing your idea thru the inflection in your voice. & also, like - i guess... to put it in laymens terms.... step your swagger up. y'know?


but good shit if these were your 1st 4 songs, my dude. just keep practicing.

Freaks,

Thnx for the feedback fam. I'm just starting to get the hang of recording so these pointers are helpful. We're still doing it out the house so the quality is what it is, gotta fix that. We're getting better each day doing this music though, it can only get better. Not bad for a white guy. I'm still waiting to catch up with you agian on Mario Kart so I can whoop you up!

 

[Unkut Yola]

i'll check more later!
but I WAS FEELIN THINK FIRST!

that beat is tight.

and the flows was inspired!
like tha style.

Who laced tha beat?

playa hits is tight too man you jus need a good quality mic and some better mixxing i think you got potential.

 

[Hihlosis]

i'll check more later!
but I WAS FEELIN THINK FIRST!

that beat is tight.

and the flows was inspired!
like tha style.

Who laced tha beat?

playa hits is tight too man you jus need a good quality mic and some better mixxing i think you got potential.

Me and my boy LBC made the beat, pretty simple but effective. We recently copped an enclosure for our mic (we recorded this raw) so the mic quality is almost there. We still need to cop a new mic though. Thnx for the feedback Yola, it just pushes me to try harder!

 

[Dirty Nappy]

Hihlosis I got u, we gonna get up and chop it up soon. You smoke?

hit me on myspace if u got it

www.myspace.com/chalkbodyoutline

otherwise PM me your # and ill hit u up

 

[Hihlosis]

Freaks,

That intro from she made hooves is off Harlem Nights.

 

[Hihlosis]

I'm heading to the studio to drop another song this weekend, hopefully I'll have it posted next week. It's an old school jam we re-did. Should be a banger. Thanx for the feedback.

 

[Hihlosis]

Uppin^

Check em out yall, Think First is a deep song, means alot to me. Thanks!!!

 

[Hihlosis]

bump....


Check 'em out, I'm getting back in the lab soon and will have about another 4-5 tracks in the next month or so I'm going to post, any feedback is appreciated.