New SPITZ track ..dark shit for siccness members

[Spitz]

Ive been tryin to get this track posted for a week but ive been sick and couldnt spit it. So here it is DESOLANT. This track is a dark look into my past. It starts in the future and works backwards, each verse is a scene of my past its all real. Stream it or if you got 56k i promise its worth the 10 mins to dled it.
get back at me

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/redspitzmusic.htm

DESOLANT 1st verse

A curtain raises, to the scene of a desolant land//
Thunderstromes shower down on a canvas of sand//
In da middle stands 1 man, while raindrop slowly drip down his mic stand, his arms open
Da look on his face says hes tired of copeing//
Eyes redder than the motha fuckin blood thats flowin//
Threw his veins, Dark images race threw his brain//
these emotions he can no longer contain//
A man wit no respect is a man wit no name//
Lighting flashes and it revels his left hand grips steel//
Da wind brings in a cold chill//
Witch further deepens da tension in a scene so fuckin sureal//
hes unable to feel, his heart racein//
inhales the last breath hell be tastein//
hands shackin fuck contiplatein//
He cocks back and pulls his head swallows da slug//
a limp body falls face down in the mud.......................

 

[Spitz]

quit sleepin on my shyt yall damn. just give me like 5 mins of your time

 

[Spitz]

man i post here all the time and ive never went 2 days wothout 1 single person droppin feedback- it only takes like 5 min to stream it. damn yall lazy a man wrights shit spits shit post shit and yall dont even take 5 mins to here the shit.

 

[Tony Slaps]

TIGHT. IM DIGGEN YOUR STYLE PIMPIN. I FEEL YOUR FUSTRATION...MAFUCKAS BE SLEEPING ON TIGHT SHIT.

COME VISIT THE SLAPSHACK..

WWW.SLAPSHACK.COM

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[cipherminds]

man man man i was not expectin that. niggas sleepin on u harder than they sleepin on us man...wheww u sound like eminem homie.. and thats a compliment cuzz i feel hes one of the illest.lets connect asap!! fire

 

[BigDS.S.F.]

not realy feelin desolant, beats is to slow .
heat is tight. good delivery
invinsable is tight too, not better than heat tho. keep it up

 

[jay deuce]

Now, if we only had some money to get some equipment and someone to teach me how to make beats we could have a nice little army started out here. HAHA

Thanks for the props, I been tryin to tell ya'll we are gonna make it for real ONE DAY

 

[Spitz]

thanx yall i want you to keep in mind everything you here on that page is rough copys of the finsihed product- thats why their is no hooks and sometimes only 2 verses- but i thank you for takein your time to listen and get back at me.