where the hell u been man...i see u gone religious full blown...well me not being a hater in any sense im gonna say this..if its right for you than props to u and hopefully everything goes good
your song is coo..i mean i think u have some work to do but theres always room for improvement...overall u got good rhyme schemes and delivery is coo...but u know..u r rappin bout religion and me not being religious at all...means i cant really feel it...but keep it up cuz obviously im not the target audience
thanks for the feedback. It could've been edited a lot better, but it is what it is. YOU, are the target audience, believe it or not. Christians don't need to hear that song, as the Jesus said "it's not the healthy that need a doctor, but the sick." if that makes sense...
I been living. Got a wife and a son now. One day at a time. My life when I was on here was too in between and lukewarm. I made a mockery of myself, and of God. I've been a Christian for 7.5 years now, and the last couple have really finally been on the right track. Thanks again for the feedback though. Hopefully there'll be more to come