New Song leak from my Grind To Shine Compilation!!!

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Dirt E. Needlez

Sicc OG
#5
Apr 11, 2008
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#5
the good: your feature came kinda sick
the bad: the rest of the song


upon listening to this track i have come to the conclusion that I feel your lyrics are very basic and simplistic and your feature outshines you on your own track, this is a huge mistake if you are going to feature an artist....you have to at least be able to keep up with them . Your delivery is sub par and needs work
But its not what you say, its how you say it...Chente proves that, while his lyrics arent overly complex his style and vocal definition far exceeds yours...you seem to be strugglin to rap what you write and it causes your vocals to sound forced (listen to your hook, its a perfect example), how long have you been rappin?
Keep workin at it, try relaxing and letting your vocals come naturally so you dont have to over emphasize on parts.


you asked for feeedback, there you go
 
recklessofgilaz

recklessofgilaz

Im Gay until I log back in
#6
Oct 30, 2008
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Gilaz with Track Killa and Vince
#6
Dirt E. Needlez said:
the good: your feature came kinda sick
the bad: the rest of the song


upon listening to this track i have come to the conclusion that I feel your lyrics are very basic and simplistic and your feature outshines you on your own track, this is a huge mistake if you are going to feature an artist....you have to at least be able to keep up with them . Your delivery is sub par and needs work
But its not what you say, its how you say it...Chente proves that, while his lyrics arent overly complex his style and vocal definition far exceeds yours...you seem to be strugglin to rap what you write and it causes your vocals to sound forced (listen to your hook, its a perfect example), how long have you been rappin?
Keep workin at it, try relaxing and letting your vocals come naturally so you dont have to over emphasize on parts.


you asked for feeedback, there you go
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thanx bro this is the kinda feedback I was looking for its very helpful ima keep at it any more feedback?
 
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ROB RIZE

Sicc OG
#12
Jan 30, 2004
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everyones a critic bro and everyone not gonna like the same thing as you...but shit sounds coo better than sum wackness rollin through the siccness just keep pushin bro if u ever in Sac holla slide through slap city 2.0 and well knock sum tracks out the park .....
 
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