NEW SINGLE I MADE

[Pak Dan]

i kno i need work but it was my 1st recorded song and it took me 3 days to complete..

i've gotten a lotta feedback and i plan on using them when i record my 2nd single which is due in 2 weeks.


hope u guys like it....


http://myspace.com/itzlildan



(i decided to post this here b/c i post here a lot and lurch suggested it cuz i got my "e-stripes" from here lol. if i wasnt allowed to post this here, a mod can delete it...)


PEACE

 

[Kon1]

man honestly your delievery isnt too hot. i mean neither is anyones first recording. but u know. u just gotta work on it. try not to use such a deep voice/anger voice. i dunno thoguh maybe thats just how u sound. wither way i give ya an E for Effort. keep at it u might BLOW.

 

[DCKingPin]

Ni**as wanna be him
Girls think they need him
Its Calis #1 man
iTs muthafucking Lil Dan.

 

[Pak Dan]

thanks a lot bruh. yea i needa work on that delivery/flow and im workin hard as hell to perfect that when i do my 2nd single no doubt. my 2nd one gon have more "emotion" and "rapping not talkin" drive

 

[Pak Dan]

if u guys cant understand me, i posted tha lyrics in BART

 

[Masked Lemon]

Did you drop my name in that shit, Dan?

 

[Sicc Dawg]

I don't have access to myspace here at work bro, I wanna check it out though

 

[Pak Dan]

Did you drop my name in that shit, Dan?

no



thx a lot sicc dawg, i appreciate it..

 

[Kon1]

lil dan
hit me on AIM: im KONPMK.

 

[Pak Dan]

im at my mom's work right now. when i get home, i'll be sure to.

 

[Kon1]

yeah i got sus shit for you.

 

[DankedOut707]

Did you drop my name in that shit, Dan?

LOL WHY WOULD HE DO THAT?

ON THE OTHER HAND, I WANT A SHOUT OUT LIL DAN. LOL I TAUGHT U THE RAMADAN ROUNDHOUSE

 

[Pak Dan]

yeah i got sus shit for you.

like what?


lol thx 707

 

[Kon1]

just hop on when u get a chance and hit me up bro.

 

[Pak Dan]

ok fosho will do

 

[DCKingPin]

Release part is gonna be off the hook
LMAO

 

[DankedOut707]

HAHA I'MA BE AT THE RECORD RELEASE PARTY. I BETTER BE UP IN VIP LIL DAN

 

[Pak Dan]

nah im not having a release party.. im still pretty small.


MAYBE for my 2nd one

 

[Pak Dan]

wow 500 plays in 3 days.. not too bad i'd say

 

[DCKingPin]

You should get a banner with a link so people can put it on myspace