New Shit!! Top Notch Shit 2 Ride To!!

[Mr. Cynical]

Whatz up please check out my page and peep tha trackz Addicted 2 Currency, Lompoc Kalifornia, and Watch Your Back (BIG ROME REMIX) and gimmie some feedback..They're all produced by my homeboy Big Rome right here in Lompoc @ his home studio...I feel this shit, ESPECIALLY Addicted 2 Currency tops anything else I've ever done...Peep it out and drop feedback here...

Herez tha link 2 my page:
http://mrcynical.iuma.com

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[CapitaL lyric]

..im listening to that addicted to currency one,,,,

..hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm (lol)

.....ok, on the real>>
the chorus, it aint workin, the production on the chorus, shoulda fucct around with 'duo shit'....

........the third verse, u started flowin faster than the other 2 before it,,,keep the same pace...

....your delivery on the first 2 verses, is on point, maybe a little more feeling put into it,,but its good,,,
...the delivery on the chorus,,,,is no good dog,,,the chorus need to hook people to the song,,,make that a focuz,,,give it a rythme,,,


.........peace, CapitaL