its alright, honestly i like your photography a lot more... obviously with more practice you'll get better...ive seen worse...remember to stick with concepts - for example: telephone poles, money, san quinn , uptown downtown ...what image does that give you? make the title relate more to the images
the ya boy one is good, try taking out the red lines from the paper to make it look just like his writing is the only thing there, and center it more so it doesnt look random - also try expanding your font list...