Im not really feeling anything. Things that stand out that I don't like are the colors of the shrimp on the 1st one, the B and the T in white on the second, and Shrimp (under sterling) blends too much with the background.
ya i dont like that either...prob go back and mess with that...
do you even like the idea is tried to use for the theme of from the gulf to you...one side has them caught on the gulf then the other is the to you and its on the diner table?
im likin it but u need to bring out the shrimp more on the first one.. its hard cuz i need to get a good look to see that those are really shrimp that im lookin at on those baskets or crates..
ya i dont like that either...prob go back and mess with that...
do you even like the idea is tried to use for the theme of from the gulf to you...one side has them caught on the gulf then the other is the to you and its on the diner table?
looks solid......
personally, on the 1st page
i would move "STERLING SHRIMP"
over just a lil and put a very slight (1 or 2 px)
blac stroke on it......
it blends in the bacground a lil 2 much 4 me....
and like TONY said the "B" and "T" should be executed a lil clearer...
