good start, i like the idea of havin it more clean and simple for an album cover
i would experament with the alignments of the text, maybe right align it all (I kno tha eastsidaz would look good right aligned atleast) or play around and find sumtin more successful cuz right now wit "tha" the "eastsidaz" and "gang bang music" all wit differnt alignment styles its not working. Like dude said maybe less bandana, more of the artists. Maybe blend the bandana into them instead of making straight lines where it cuts off. Also i would make the background behind the artists have sum kinda blue tint and maybe even give the artists a blue tint...all just suggestions