NEW BIG J TRACK FEATURING KLYPSO AND E-ONE!!!

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MOBB LIFE - BIG J, Klypso, E-ONE
Produced by Me
Klypso appears courtesy of OH MY Entertainment
E-ONE appears coutesy of Non-Stop Records.

http://www.ampcast.com/music/12835/artist.php

This is a little song about Smokin' and Drivin. Peep it out, let me what ya'll think. I also encoded the MP3 at the highest rate I could, to get the best possible sound quality.

PUT THAT SHIT IN THA ERR!!! BURN IT!!!
 
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^uppin'

Just need a little constructive Criticism on this one folks. if it sucks, What Could I do to make it better(keep in mind I haven't done any lyrics in a while, I usually just make tha beats(this is a different style than what i usually do too)
 

Mr. D-Sane

Sicc OG, muthafucka
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Well.......I didn't want to offend you.....but it doesn't move me. I'm not really feelin' the beat.....it's not horrible though. What bothers me is the way the vocals are sitting in the mix. What kind of processing are you doing on the vocals? Compression? Reverb? They sound pretty raw. Also.....don't be afraid to EQ your vocals (I don't know if you do?). The first verse (you?) is a little bass heavy to me. The hook and second verse sounds cool. The third verse is a little bassy to me too. I usually EQ most of the low end out of my vocals....that way there is more room in the mix for the low end shit like basslines and kicks.....they won't conflict. Some cats have deeper voices and you don't want them to be more prominent in the mix than a cat with a lighter voice. For example.....the second cat rappin' doesn't need much work to his shit.....he sounds alright. But you guys overpower him.......you want it to be nice and smooth with a nice transition from verse to hook to verse to hook.

Just my .02 cents. Take it or leave it.
 
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I try to keep compression at a minimum, I usually don't EQ much on tha Vocals, But Thatz a Very Good tip, I'll keep that in miind, I jurst threw up a Rough Mix anyway.Good lookin' out D