bern,
ya flow has improved, .but this song was one of the better ones ive heard from you, the video direction and footage is clean overall, even your voice isnt as annoying/high pitched as I once thought it was. The hustle youve shown with music is commendable
..............on the flip side.........
IMO the "braggin im a dopedealer" type rappin aint for me, ive been there and done that and never understood why a cat, if he really doin the things he saying, would record a video basically snitching on himself or even alluding to the fact that hes remotely involved with anything of that sort....if..and I say IF, i was a dopedealin rappin..i wouldnt even touch the subject, but thats just me...and im sure the responce could be "but thats all i know, i only speak on what I know about"
anyways, Bernie keep hustlin man, i still extend my offer to review on of your albums, i havent heard an entire album of your music and would be willing to give it a shot.
you out there makin some good moves in the music business as far as connections and doing videos...like i said I cant deny the fact that you got the drive within you..
clean video dude.