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in10city_131x

in10city_131x

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Sep 26, 2002
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not bad. some nice ideas there. i like it. but as far as constructive criticism... the main synth needs to be sequenced better. it's now a bit choppy in the wrong way... either smoothen it out by programming or make it more choppy, intentionally choppy

also, if it was "mixed" better it would have more appeal. and what's with the snare... at first i thought it was out of phase .... there's something weird goin on there

good work tho. i could definately see tech or someone with a similar style rappin on this.


edit: about the main synth... i think i was wrong... but you should somehow "seperate" the actual "melody" and then the chord accents that are almost the same sound as the melody (maybe even the same patch) it's those chord accents that make it sound un-pro... not that they're wrong just have to have them serve their function right
 
Heat Myser

Heat Myser

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Jul 7, 2002
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Quit trying to put so many effects on your sounds....putting shitty effects on shitty sounds only makes them sound shittier.

Get better sounds.
 
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