WELL ON THE FIRST ONE THE HORIZEN IN THE BACK IS TOO LOW AND IT CLASHES WITH THE WORD BALLIN THAT MIGHT BE HOW YOU MENT IT BUT THATS HOW IT READS TO ME! OTHER THEN THAT ITS GOOD AND REMEMBER LESS IS ALWAYS MORE IF YOU CAN CONVEY THE MESSAGE IN ONE IMAGE WHY USE 5 SO GOOD SHIT AND KEEP AT IT!