MY NEW WRITING STYLE! PEEP IT HOS!

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ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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i had been lookin for a while for somethin to set me apart from the rest of the artists...i think i FINALLY found a writing style that does that....if i HAD TO label it...id call it a mix between tech n9ne....a sick ass flow (wait till you hear it in audio!) and a big ass riddle....tell me what yall think...the verse topic is me losing my ex girlfriend due to my ways..PEEP!



the second sister signaled subcoumin to the stress/
of my anger and my constant need to cum upon her breasts/
the hurt and drummin pumpin blood done rummaged through my chest/
its fuck the love, it felt like love was crumpin in my flesh/
something ugh-is-in-the-mess, smashin fragments of her soul/
she throwin dishes at a playa like nash was in the hole/
my jealousy made me think that even nash was in the hole/
labled models of a queen as dirty fashions of a ho/
ME dashed into the role thats of my fathers abuse/
abusin the fathers dreamin of children modelin truth/
if she knew i was slabbin ally, she'd be cockin the duece/
whos in the cochran?, who into pac'n? poppin a troop/
gangbang for the dummies, no bang for the others/
i hopemy children dont end up with a couple of mothers/
but my favorites gone/
mary-issa, i can barely kiss her without my make up on/
 
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Lil Oso XIV

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ITS PRETTY GOOD, YOU SEEM TO BE GETTIN BETTER, IT JUST TAKES TIME.
ITS EASIER TO READ WHEN YOU WRTIE LIKE THAT, THATS HOW I WRITE MY FLOWS. BUT PEOPLE JUST READ THE END OF THE BAR TO SEE WHAT WORDS ARE RHYMING, THEN SAY ITS HELLA SIMPLE CUZ THEY DONT READ WHAT YOUR SAYIN, JUST READING THE RHYMING WORDS. KIND OF HARD TO EXPLAIN....
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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^yea i get what your sayin....i can get the rhymin words sick....im just focusing on a new style to get my ish sounding more original but still have that southern flavor and sound and sick rhymes...
 
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theflatz707

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Lil Oso XIV said:
BUT PEOPLE JUST READ THE END OF THE BAR TO SEE WHAT WORDS ARE RHYMING, THEN SAY ITS HELLA SIMPLE CUZ THEY DONT READ WHAT YOUR SAYIN, JUST READING THE RHYMING WORDS
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naw i read all yur shit n it dont flow cuz u got 2 many words inbetween yur rhyming words n when u do rhyme most of the time there easy 1 syllable rhymes
 
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Lil Oso XIV

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SHOW ME A ONE SYLLABLE RHYMING WORD FOOL.

NO MATTER WHAT I ALWAYS HAVE POTENTIAL
IN THIS RAP RITUAL
SO LYRICAL
TO ME ITS SPIRITUAL
SOMETHIN LIKE MYSTICAL
ITS HARD WHEN YOUR A HABITUAL . CRIMINAL
BUT IM JUST TRYIN TO BE LIVIN AS AN INDIVIDUAL
BUT IM STUCK IN A SITUATION CRITICAL
TRYIN TO KEEP IT TO A MINUMAL
LIKE A CONSERVATIVE POLITICAL
PEOPLE LIKE IRONIC C MAKE ME CYNICLE
I GOT A VIRUS N ITS NOT CLINICLE
ITS MY FLOW N ITS NOT BIBLICLE
YOU FOOLZ ARE TRASH, SO YOUR RECYCLEABLE
NOW LET ME SWITCH IT UP A LITTLE
KEEP YOU GUESSIN LIKE A RIDDLE
YOUR GETTIN PLAYED LIKE A FIDDLE
IT SUCKS WHEN YOUR STUCK N THE MIDDLE
LIKE MY FINGER N THE AIR
AS IM CRUISEN N MY 67 BELAIR
 
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theflatz707

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Lil Oso XIV said:
SHOW ME A ONE SYLLABLE RHYMING WORD FOOL.

NO MATTER WHAT I ALWAYS HAVE POTENTIAL
IN THIS RAP RITUAL
SO LYRICAL
TO ME ITS SPIRITUAL
SOMETHIN LIKE MYSTICAL
ITS HARD WHEN YOUR A HABITUAL . CRIMINAL
BUT IM JUST TRYIN TO BE LIVIN AS AN INDIVIDUAL
BUT IM STUCK IN A SITUATION CRITICAL
TRYIN TO KEEP IT TO A MINUMAL
LIKE A CONSERVATIVE POLITICAL
PEOPLE LIKE IRONIC C MAKE ME CYNICLE
I GOT A VIRUS N ITS NOT CLINICLE
ITS MY FLOW N ITS NOT BIBLICLE
YOU FOOLZ ARE TRASH, SO YOUR RECYCLEABLE
NOW LET ME SWITCH IT UP A LITTLE
KEEP YOU GUESSIN LIKE A RIDDLE
YOUR GETTIN PLAYED LIKE A FIDDLE
IT SUCKS WHEN YOUR STUCK N THE MIDDLE
LIKE MY FINGER N THE AIR
AS IM CRUISEN N MY 67 BELAIR
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that ones better but yur other verses had alotta 1 styllables
 
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