my last lyrics

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Jul 21, 2002
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yeah, i know. i said no more threads from me, but here is the last song i will probably ever write, i was gonna get into the studio with this one but i had made my decision about life a week or so later, but check it out anyways, leave feedback if you want, good or bad

YOUR GAME'S FULL OF SALT,
SO HALT YOUR ASSAULT,
OR I'LL INSTALL, AND 8 FOOT STICK IN YO EYE,
AND POLE VAULT FROM IT/
I SET THE NEW RECORD,
CLEARED 12 FEET,
Y'ALL GONE RUNNIN,
THAT'S 6 PEEPS, WITH 2 FEET EACH
I JUST WATCHED YA JAWS PLUMMET/
I'LL DISOLVE YA GALL BLADDER,
PAINT YA WALLS WITH BRAIN MATTER,
I REMAIN THE MAIN FACTOR,
THIS AIN'T THE SAME RAPPER/
I INFLICT PAIN FASTER,
THAN YOU CAN SAY HUSSEIN BACKWARDS,
WATCH YOUR GUTS SPLIT SPLATTER,
I GOT THIS MURDER THANG MASTERED/
YOU GET THE GIST CROSS YOUR NAME OFF THE LIST,
WHAT JUST HAPPENED?,
YOU LOST ALL YOUR THOUGHTS
AND JUST SHIT YA GRAY KHAKIS/
I AIN'T KNOWN,
BUT I'LL SMACK NORAH JONES,
AND TAKE HOME HER 8 GRAMMY'S,
MY FATHER IS NOT OZZY,
BUT I CAME FROM AN INSANE FAMILY/
I GOT CRAZY IN MY VEINS
LIKE LAID FACE DOWN ON A CO-CAINE MATTRESS,
Y'ALL CLAIMIN TO BE GANGSTAS
BUT YOU AIN'T EVEN GOOD ACTRESSES/
I JUST CREATED SHIT,
GOOD ENOUGH TO BE THE NEXT PLATINUM HIT,
ALL I NEED IS TO BE SEEN BY AFTERMATH'S MANAGEMENT/
NOT SINCE MARSHALL MATHERS,
HAS THERE BEEN A SEED THAT'S THIS DASTARDLY,
TO THE MUSIC BUISNESS,
I'M WORSE THAN THE HURT OF THE CURSE SERVED BY NAPSTER/
I DESERVE, A CERTIFIED PLAQUE FOR MY ACTIONS,
I THINK I EARNED IT,
WHEN I TURNED EVERY MIC TO BURNED ASHES/
I'M PREFERRED OVER 30 TO 1 OVER THE LAME RAPPERS,
THEY CONCERNED CAUSE THEIR FANS,
ALL RETURNED THEIR LAST MASTERPIECE/
LIKE A JACKHAMMER,
YOU HEAR ME OUT ON THE STREETS CRACKIN,
LIKE A FAT KID, STEPPED ON THIN ICE,
IT'S A BAD ACCIDENT/
IT WASN'T IN THE PLAN FOR MY VOICE TO BE BROADCASTED,
ON THE RADIO, UNITED STATES WIDE,
A DISASTER'S HIT/
THE BLUEPRINTS ALL BEEN LAID OUT,
AND GOD DRAFTED IT,
HE SAID I COULD SIT ON THIS THRONE,
CAUSE I HAND CRAFTED IT////

THE SONG WASN'T DONE, JUST SOME LYRICS. STEAL THE LYRICS IF YOU WANT EM', IT AIN'T FOR ME ANYMORE. LATE
 

RIX

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?????????????? I THINK WHEN U SAID U GON STOP, U SHUDA STOPPED HOGG

SALT- ASSAULT? DON'T RHYME RIGHT? WHAT DOES THAT MEAN "YO GAMES FULL OF SALT? R U DEHYDRATED?


"OR I'LL INSTALL, AND 8 FOOT STICK IN YO EYE,
AND POLE VAULT FROM IT"
DAAAAAAAAAAAMN HOMIE, IN H.S U WAS THA MANNN HOMIE

lolllllllllllll WHAT THA FUCKED RHYMED WITH "EYE"

OH YEA, AND A REGULAR RAP VERSE IN A SONG IS USUALLY 16
' BARS, U TRIED TO PULL AND EMINEM ON THA SONG "RUN RABBIT RUN" U TRIPPIN DOG, U AINT NO EM, AND UH, U AINT A GOOD RAPPER EITHER, JUSS MY 2 CENTS,

LIKE 50 SAID, "I GET PENNYS FO MY THOUGHT, AND NOW IM RICH" so take my advise, cuz yo rap career aint goin no where fast, its actually goin nowhere, slow.

SORRY BUT YO SHIT IS WHACK
 
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some coo parts to that verse [email protected] some of them garbage ass raps u were revealing in you "legendary bay area recovery" post...u shouldnt be speakin shit on chris...and whats this bout a normal rap verse only containing 16 verses?...its called BARS genius...learn somethin...not NUFFIn modda fukka...


4reals tho..how u type such bullshit ass words?...that shit is gettin old nikka..
 
Jul 21, 2002
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can't believe i actually have to explain this to someone!!!!!!!!
the rhyme scheme does work. the whole word in itself does not rhyme, but the sound within the word does.....so the words, halt, assault and salt do rhyme.

and YOUR game is full of salt there rix, you are such a lame, you don't even know what salt in your game means.:confused:

rap verses aren't even 16 bars all the time anyways, listen to a too $hort song for example. and since when does it have to be exactly as someone else says it is? music is an art and doesn't have to be what someone else says it is. look at picasso's paintings, they weren't like anything else. if you wanna be some normal rapper and do what everyone else does, you need to step up your shit to even be on that level, but when you get there, you will just be another boring rapper saying the same ol' shit.

and nothing rhymed with eye, there is no set rhyme scheme throughout the whole damn song. if i limited myself to a specific rhyme scheme, i may aswell be writing mother goose type shit.

as you will see rix, other people do and have felt the shit i have had to say in raps. i blow you out of the water with my raps homie, and alot of em were freestyles. i could sell just off the buzz from the siccness, may not be thousands and shit, but i could sell enough to make a decent profit, that's more than you could say
 

RIX

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AIGHT THEN, U RIGHT IM WRONG? NIGGA FUCK IT THEN, ALL IM SAYIN IS, U SHUDA STOPPED WHEN U SAID U WERE, CUZ THIS RAP IS PROLLY YO WORST
 

RIX

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AND HOW THA FUCK WAS I SPITTIN GARBAGE? WHEN HALF THA NIGGAS WERE RAPPIN BOUT TOTAL OPPOSITE BULLSHIT?
 
Nov 2, 2002
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WTF? do you think you are better than everyone else in here? WHy do you feel the urge to make an entire thread dedicated to how you are not posting here anmyore? Then you come out with some bullshit "my last lyrics". wtf? what do you think you are, some higher force or something? tryin to pull some barbera streisand "my final tour" shit.
everyone say bye bye to chris messiah...
 
Jul 21, 2002
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no i don't think i am better at all than everyone. fc ene also made a thread sayin he was taking off too. the only reason i said that, is cause i would talk with people on here on the regular, it was for them, not the ones who didn't like me. and as for the lyrics, i didn't know what else to name the thread. get over it
 

RIX

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LOLLLLLLLLLLLL THASS MY NIGGA RIGHT THERE
925 MOW FUCKA, LOLLLLLLL

CHRIS MESSIAH, MOW FUCKIN THIS NIGGA CHOGG, SHUG BE CALLED MOW FUCKIN JOAN OF ARC N SHIT, MOW FUCKIN JONAH JAMES TUT N SHIT, FUCK U CHRISHOGG, I MEAN MESSIAH.





LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
 
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your fuckin gay ....u need to hit up some typing classes cuz that shit is ridiculous

"MOW FUCKIN "

"SHUG"
??????????

U TRYIN TO HARD TO BE HARD...IF U REALLY HARD IT AINT THAT HARD(READ THIS A FEW TIMES AND UNDERSYAND YOUR A DEEPTHROAT COCK SMOKER)
 

RIX

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WHAT THA FUCK IS YO PROBLEM NIGGA? U GOT SUM KINDA REPROIR WIT FUCKIN CHRISDOGG IN THA ASS? NIGGA U THA COCKSUCKER, U SPEND MORE TIME ON THA BOARDS THAN ANYONE ELSE, PROVING THAT U REALLY HAVE NO HO'S, AND THA FACT THAT U TALK SHIT TO BACK UP OTHER NIGGAS WHEN THEY SHUD BE DOIN THEY OWN JOB OF HAVIN THEIR SAY IN WHAT THA FUCK THEY DO. LEARN SUM PROPER GRAMMAR, AND IM NOT THA ONE WIT THA NAME "MOW FUCKA" AIGHT
 
Apr 25, 2002
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NAW BITCH U ON SOME OLD GAY SHIT..AND YOUR FUCKIN RETARTED...

U GOT SOME KINDA GRUDGE AGAINST CHRIS?..U SEEM LIKE U MAD CUZ HE WOULDNT STUFF HIS DICK DOWN YOUR THROAT..

I DONT GIVE A FUCK WHO U TALKIN SHIT TO..ITS THE FACT THAT YOUR THE FUCKIN WEENIEST CAT ON THIS SITE..AND U TRYNA COME ACROSS LIKE A SAVAGE>

NIGGA?..ARE U BLACK?...NAW...SO KILL THAT

AND YOU NEED TO LEARN THAT TYPING IN EBONIX DOESNT MAKE U LOOK COOL....FUCKIN MARK...

IM ON THIS SITE THE MOST?..BAHAHA..I WONT EVEN ANSWER THAT LIL HOE CAKE STATEMENT..

ONLY THING I CAN SAY IS...IM THE NET HEAD BUT YOU THE ONE WITH LIL INTERNET BUDDIES..."925 MOW FUCKA...THATS MY NIGGA"

YA SIMPLE MINDED BITCH
 

RIX

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U GOT A DUMB ASS COMPLEX, AND FO ALL IM CONCERNED, I DONT NEED TO ACT HARD TO BE HARD AIGHT. N WUSSUP WIT ALL THA GAY JOKES? AND WHAT IF THIS IS THA ONLY WAY I TYPE? NIGGA WHY DOES WHAT I DO BOTHHER U SO MUCH?

WHY U GETTIN ALL HYPED UP, ITS ONLY THE INTERNET, I KNOW IT MIGHT BE YOUR SECOND HOME, BUT THERE IS HONESTLY NO NEED TO TALK SHIT, AND IF U WANNA SEE ME A BOUT SOMFIN, JUSS SAY THA WORD, AND WE CAN HANDLE IT AIGHT? I AINT CALLIN U OUT, BUT IF U GOT SO MUCH FUNK, SAY SOMFIN, OR DO SOMFIN ABOUT IT AIGHT.
 
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HAHAHAHA...U CHALLENGING ME TO SQUAB U OVER THE NET FUNK?
DAMN..ONLY LIL POODLES GOT ENUFF SPACE ON THERE AGENDA TO FUNK OVER NET QUIRRELS

BUT BELIEVE THIS...IF U SAY "THE WORD"...IT CAN BE CRACKIN AND HAPPEN IN WHATEVER FASHION....CUZ AINT NO FEAR PUMPIN THRU MY VEINS U NET SOLJER...

WHY U SO TOUCHY ON THE GAY SUBJECT? DID I STRIKE A NERVE?

IM DONE WITH U KID...BUT DONT TRY TO JAM ME UP BY CHALLENGIN ME TO BEAT YOUR ASS...IF U SO UPTY UP ABOUT FUNKIN WITH ME..U CAN PM ME..OTHERWISE...IM THRU WITH THIS THREAD