my fisrt siccness flow

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May 22, 2002
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im gonna bless the board holla with feed back positive neagative its all love


you throw your sign im throwin mine
they aint the same thats why we claim
i live to bang
i love my gang
keeps me spittin ghetto slang
so why you wanna test?
get lifted up from out your vest
spray NFS across your chest
dot your hood up in my colors
bring the pain to your mothers
preachin death upon your brothers
NFS above all others
band of brothers
stand together
fight as one
droppin haters one by one
NFS the dynasty has begun
 
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All Out HOGG

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#6
Ima disagree...I liked it...Was VERY simple...But it had a constant flow to it...


......Lifes a concept that never getts old sinse everyone can relate to it...However fruadulate tails tend to bore...

Now if ya don't mind i need to ....'grab the strap & gett to bustin...cuase whatever im fuckin im cummin white like russians"...

<-----Ya local lil blue mexican savelle...
 
Apr 25, 2002
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IMA SAY THAT WUZ TIGHT...HAD THAT GANG BANGIN KINDA SHIT TO IT...THATZ MYYYYY TYPA RAPZ....NO FUCKIN 3 RHYME BARZ...NO METAPHOR BULLSHIT...NO COMPLEX SHIT...JUST THROWIN UP WATCHU CLAIM...THAT SHIT FLOWED VERY SMOOTH...GOOD SHIT HOMIE...REAL TALK...NO SARCASM...CANT WAIT TA SEE WHAT ELSE YOU GOT...DAMN I LIKED THAT SHIT...$IDEWAYZ
 
Apr 25, 2002
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tank locc said:
no metaphor or complex shit, so basiccly u are sayin no elaborate, flows that u actually gotta put ur mind too? sounds about right.....
FUCK HAVIN TA PUT YOUR MIND TO IT...IF THA VATO WANNA THINK MORE BOUT HOW IT FLOWZ INSTEADA WHAT THREE WORDZ RHYME WITH THOZE THREE WORDZ AND DIFFERENT METAPHORZ...THEN FUCK IT...LET HIM DO HIZ SHIT INSTEADA SAYIN BUNCHA NEGATIVE SHIT...THEREZ DIFFERENT TYPA FLOWZ...IT AINT TALENTLESS IF HE WANNA TAKE A SHORT CUT...I THINK MY HOMIE RIGH HERE LAYED IT DOWN...DONT TRY TA WRITE A LIL SARCASTIC ASS REPLY CUZ MY OPINIONZ DIFFERENT...BITCHMADE SHIT...BUT ANYWAYZ...YOU GOT YOUR OPINION AND I GOT MINE...HOMIE LAYED IT DOWN IN MINE...SIMPLE...FUCK OFF...$IDEWAYZ
 
May 22, 2002
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you want metaphores similies an all that hocus pocus mumbo jumbo......? aight peep this-

up from the slum how i come creepin dumb diddy dumb dumb
my tiggie tech 9 connects with your spine
the only witness is blind so it hard to pick me out the line
i come from behind an take you outta the game
you speakin dirt on my name now your feelin the pain
bet your sorry i came talkin bout your click the best
gotta nigga from the crest always strap your vest
but when its on its cap peel-uh on the real-uh
bullets sprayed in teflon bust till every body dead an gone
an it gose on an on since the days of old so the stories been told
im so hot i scold melt the flesh off your body
another sucka droped by the loddie dottie
playin murda muzic on the 12 gauge shotie
erray scurry bullets fly in a flurry
i spit a leathal lyrics check it practice your forensics
check the ballistics you cant trace my bullets
im killin:dead: yall spit without a flaw come correct from the jaw
yall pull drive bys i got homies on stand by
one stand by the corner the other at the mourge to notify the coarner
hatin fags get zipped up in body bags with bitchmade scralled across they toe tags
its unbeleaveable that can bring a myjestic evil raise rhyme to another level doin dirt for the devil
yall 56k nigga laggin i spit flames like a dragon
burn nigga burn
 
Apr 26, 2002
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allright typcee let me rephrase, there is a differance between a lyricsit andd rapper, this guy is simply a rapper, i anit being a smart ass either, when it comes to lyricsim the flow was shity, but since he "put it down" it could be considerd tight just in appeal to a differant genre that prefers subsatnce before anything