MY COMMENTS ON YOUNGMOE'S LYRICS!!!!!

[D-Locc60]

"but that's the game mayne, hop crank and cocaine
cellophane and bakin soda, b-twelve and propane/
food stamps... section eight's, H-U-D and razor blades
junky mommas makin' baby fiends, they couldn't change they ways/
my disciples is street kids... that done at least three bids
ain't even fifteen still... they already have three kids/
so tell em what a dream is , when mommas just a fiend bitch
that's out there suckin mean dick, strugglin for each hit/
and these days he's grown, holdin on for his life
momma's little ghetto boy, try to get over the strife/
he's a hard headed soldier, keepin cash in his socks
and there's a crack in the buildin where he stash all his rocks/
every book report he did was on Iceberg Slim
live like a kid in the in day, but at night turns grim/"
Young Moe

LIKE WHOA!!!





TIGHT SHIT MANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!
i give props, when props are due.



D-Locc

 

[MOESES SOULRIGHT THE 2nd]

right on folks...
it's a lot of real life in that verse and i'm glad people feel it...

erryone of my folks has a parent dying or has a parent that's died from drug use...or has a parent that was an addict

it means a lot to me for someone to feel that shit...and it's what keeps me goin in this game

thnx a lot folks

real recognize real...

 

[TeKK MoNeY]

i just made a beat that would go hard as fuck with them lyriks ...ughhhh im feeling it Moe-diggler!

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

yea brings heat... holla at yo boy Skee.. me and him bout to do a track

 

[servnu151]

wait till ya'll here YOUNGMOE on 151XPLICIT

my boy has talent, and with a voice that cant be copied! keep it comin MOE, and lets hook on what we spoke about

 

[loki]

shit, imma co-sign that one....
thats some deep shit.

 

[D-Locc60]

shit, imma co-sign that one....
thats some deep shit.
loki

YOU KNOW!!!

ITS THE TIGHTEST VERSE IVE READ ON THE 91SICCNESS IN A
LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG TIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!



I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE!!



D-LOCC

 

[5ive1en]

does he have an mp3 page or anything? get some tracks up on here so we can hear u...

 

[FastLane/S::G]

yep

 

[noWetaG]

MOEs dope with a pen or mic................
yall who aint knowin, start playin catch-up..........

 

[Mr. Chronic]

Yeah, that shit was way cool...keep doin' what you do....

 

[RODZILLA]

Goddamm, Dat verse is structured sooo well.....
Dats tha big homie Moe 4 ya.....

 

[phil]

i was feelin that shit too.

 

[Solitary 1]

Yeah that shit's real gutter, classic, vivid shit.

Keep it movin Moe.

 

[Psilo707]

Tight fucking verse... those lyrics are very very well put together.

 

[DaNaleJ]

ill street poetry shyt Moe..I Lykez

 

[illapino]

that was pretty dope...

he's a hard headed soldier, keepin cash in his socks
and there's a crack in the buildin where he stash all his rocks/

 

[ChopShop]

that's poetry right there... I'ma keep an eye out Moe. Grant Theft

 

[Blackjack 1577]

Yea that was some deep shit

I'm feelin that verse moe

 

[THA RIPPA]

amazing moses....keep it up

reminds me of somehting NAS would say