my best work yet..only cause i only posted

[SLOWPOKE]

four times hahahahahahahahahaa
but there is always something others can see
that you can't.. and i wanna ask the artists on here..
what can i do to make it better?....

thanks to e-dub...you are tha primo !!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[SPORADIC]

If you're a beginner. Not bad! You got the dude in their too little. minimal focus. You'll want to make him bigger (center of focus) and work the text and design around him. The fire in the back is cool but to get that "trial" element in their. Try to "blend" some kind of laws in the fire. A book overlayed in the fire or some sort. The text can be worked on also but like I said. If you new at this.. Its not bad!

 

[SLOWPOKE]

thanks....for the ideas.....i'ma shoot for some "amendment" type fonts fading or as you would say "blending" over the fire (i even talk like a rookie hahahah)
started back in like 6 months ago hitting it hard
yup this is my 4th project that i will put on my resume
i may even change the tittle to "phinox N flight" (cause his name is byrdie)
i got his logo and can add it ..maybe that would have more "relations"
than the trial thing........man now i think that would be running from your i deas...so now i'm gonna do both... (man i only wanna do the easy one hahahaha)

it means a lot for you to say that (that i'm walking down the right road)


thanks for your input...it helps my creativy (now let see if you can help me find spell check on the siccness ahahahahahahaha)