Ma new song (DOPE WACK DECENT?)

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KODOGG

KODOGG

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(Static) Im Comin Im Comin (Drop Mic) (Static)

~A playa straight from Antioch now set on Concordz Block
~When he bust out his 9 your times up *tick tock*
~Cock back 'n blow anotha Loc
~NO KriMiNaL wont let anotha die
~NO KriMiNaL wont let hoes in his Ryde
~Unless dey wanna ryde ma (OoOoO)
~Now move cuz ma strap in yo face
~Ma gatz Info Reds dot on trace
~Bout to let some heat lace

(CLICK BOOM)

[Chorus]
OoO one original Gangsta
OoO Hes one hard Bangsta
OoO hoe later
(CLICK BOOM)

~Gloved hand on da trigga
~Let lose as ma rep grew bigga
~Hoe sit yo ass down
~Ryde yo ass round 'n round
~'n then murder yo body lost 'n neva to be found
~Beatin rap clownz in jus one round
~Put'n em in da ring
~1 2 3 Ding Ding Ding
~Gettin first swing
~Ya on da ground
~I got da crown
~Cuz I be da king

[Chorus]
OoO one original Gangsta
OoO hes one hard Bangsta
OoO Hoe Later
(CLICK BOOM)

~Show no respect ta ya haters
~No Respect to ya fakestas
~Now you can brag ya know KriMiNaL
~But ya dont know shit yo education on limital
~But heres da Basicz
~He likes his gun 'n likes to lace it
~Usuly in da chest is where he placed it
~Now fake ass boyz be frontin
~But you girlz ass is what I be bumpin
~Back up scrap before I let anotha gat loose
~Makin yo ass see mo then one but twoz
~Black 'n bluez is da color you be now
~Diz da final Bout
~Boy letz hear ya shout

[Chorus]
OoO one original Gangsta
OoO hes one hard Bangsta
OoO Hoe Later (Echo)

[CHANGE VOICE]

~Young KriMiNaL the boss
~Punk motha boyz is what he be toss'n
~Ak blast off
~Songz be soarin to the top
~Cuz that crazy ass boy KriMiNaL will roar non stop
~Rhymes real dope how ya boyz cope
~Back off ya lil joke
~Back off til ya ass is smoked ba ma 45
~Boy its all about the 925 (ECHO)

I have the audio to but i have no where to load a WAV file..
Jus tell me if iam good wack or decent or whatever.. If iam wack what do I need to work on? And remind you this is jus a rough draft + done in about 5 minz.
 
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Conquest

Sicc OG
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Jan 22, 2003
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shit wasn't all that but i have heard worse...

first off the chorus. whats a bangsta. sound like you tryin to bite offa 50 cent (wanksta)

second (this is a personal prefrence)

i personally believe that sentences sound better then statements. for example..

statement:

~1 2 3 Ding Ding Ding
~Gettin first swing
~Ya on da ground
~I got da crown
~Cuz I be da king

sentence:

~A playa straight from Antioch now set on Concordz Block
~When he bust out his 9 your times up *tick tock*

but if you can use statements on a SINGLE subject then it will sound decent. some like makin statements instead of sentences throughout a flow because they're easier to make. I think you need to jus sharpen your skills. Give points to your flows, don't jus flow about meaningless shit. If you get practice in i think you can be a force to reckon with on here.
 
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-TiM C-

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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a song is something recorded dawg.. no matter how wack/tyte the lyrics unless you can hear it being spit u cant really judge it. grab a mic and spit that homie.
 
KODOGG

KODOGG

Sicc OG
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LoL i know 'em all.. Not real well tho.. Ma broz get along with em tho.. but itz jus last year (when they went to ph) i wasnt that popular, but me an Trazdon talked durin P.E hella.. He's hella coo' lol.. alwayz helped me slaingin.. Haha.
 
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SkARfAcE x925

Sicc OG
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Jan 29, 2003
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trezdon's a faggot. lmao j/p. thats my nigga right there. postin up in computer class hellof fuccin keyed eatin foil burritos, hot pockets, and gummy worms and shit.. lmao thats my nigga fosho...


i don't think i know you tho... "Josh Stone".. name dont sound familiar..
 
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Chaos

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Sep 16, 2002
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yea you know that fool marcus? he ma nigga, cant deny it! hes one pimpfullassnegro me n that motha fucka always havin some good times
 
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