"Lyrikal" Gimme Sum Feedback Homeboyz

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

i took a stab at another audio. check it out and let me know wutz up. i know it aint professional and wut not, i'd need a studio or studio tyme for that, and there'z no way in hell i can afford that ryght now. but let me know....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/fatalnyghtmaremusic.htm

dont 4get to click that Lyricz/Story page if u cant understand sum wordz.

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

i've seen some better from ya in "text" but your audio was way better then the first one.... at least you improving dawg... keep running with it

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

i know homie my "text" iznt even that good anymore. for sum reazon i juzt cant get into it lyke i uzed to. but hey, thiz wuz my firzt attempt at rhyming since tha lazt tyme i pozted rhymez in text which wuz about 2 monthz ago at leazt. so, fuck it.

BTW Biggz i still havent heard tha audio u put up. send me a link or sumthin via PM'z.

 

[All Out HOGG]

personaly i think your vocals suck ass

 

[Juan Million]

I concur. :dead: