LRYICALLY WAREFARE.. FEEDBACK IS WANTED...

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

I don't spit "SALIVA" heat so hot out my mouth you think its LAVA-
When i touch the mic keep ya awake like 10 cups of JAVA-
Kidnapped ya crew..ya mama..bitch smack who? now theres Drama-
Like a Machine all nite i'm obscene... breezys left and right are my routine-
fuck Oxygen liek CHEVRON i breathe gasoline... black Tim's... black suit... i'm unseen-
bout to control the universe.. ghettos get worst... automatics burst-
reverse the trend rehearse the intentions of the curse.. cure the thirst-
listen to other rappers are COMMENTARY, speakin with a slang for literary-
we aint ordianry techs and shot guns are my military 12 hundred my sanctuary-
aggravate BIGGZ get your head ampuated blood in the allys is how we decorate-
its blood season.. calculate dead bodies hesitate for what?
illustrate the battle image... imitate Wolrd war actions.. motivate others-
your mother had an error producin you...1987 i was born to start terror-
live the street game dont be a bitch and hide be true and have 6 pallbearers
sharp and poisionous.poisionous and sharp arrows destroy the bone marrow-
no one will miss you when ya die... Biggz is the sergeant of war.. lyrical pharaoh-

feedback yall

 

[THA RIPPA]

sicc shitt.......i like the one "i put the R in rap , use the AP to bust 9s" one more tho

still WAY better than most of the shit i read

 

[tank locc]

tight shit

 

[Stealth]

I thought it was tight, but i've seen better from you. It didn't "flow" as well as other raps i've seen you post.