look..

[x-kalibur]

SoMe SpITz

ain't flowed in a minute.. I just spit somethin right quick for yaw to peep..


I got that funk-in-the-trunk 'n a pump-with-intent to dump a chump//
Amputatin um down from the knees-'n-leavin-um-stumped//
That-lump-in ya throat gettin sliced-with-precision//
I'll leave um 'full-of-holes' 'n let you witness this thick incision..//
Make-ya-decision-head-on collision, I'm not takin it easy-on these faggots at all//
X here to-make-sure ya downfall-is-picture perfect, when my fist-makes full contact 'n connects to-ya-glass jaw//
I'm ready to rip-shit with a mask 'n a chainsaw, skin-heads 'n leave um dead with they ass raw//
Fucka-brawl, I'm not even gonna take much-time-on a rhyme I'll remain that homeboy in the cuts-rippin guts like a mime//
Fucka-nine, half the cats on the siccness don't even wanna know what I'm about//
No doubt, I'm in and out not-hesitant to battle none, I don't take this shit seriously its-strictly-for fun//
Now who wants-to-speak on X? what you expect, youll get checked 'n wrecked in the worst way//
Faggots always frontin then find themselves in caskets for the rest their family to display, when I let-teks gun spray!//

 

[TONY206]

nice rhyme scheme

 

[Slappin Beatz]

yeah shits coo homie keep it coming like a helocoper wooh wooh chickenheads whooh whooh

 

[Chaos]

^^^LOL

 

[x-kalibur]

uppin for feedback..

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

Well it started off sicc... then fell off.... then brought it back....


Some lines i liked...

That-lump-in ya throat gettin sliced-with-precision//
I'll leave um 'full-of-holes' 'n let you witness this thick incision..//

and

No doubt, I'm in and out not-hesitant to battle none, I don't take this shit seriously its-strictly-for fun//

the middle of the verse was weak.. oyu could rip it better then that...


I like the rhyme within rhyme of bars.... shit sounds coo as fuck on wax.... and reading it is clean.... keep doin ya thang

 

[x-kalibur]

thanks biggz.. maybe i'll have to put that on wax.. i just cop'd some beats!:devious:

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

let me know if ya need beats.. i got connections...

 

[Greg Double]

feelin this mayne.. stay up