LOAK FROM THE BLOK

[EDJ]

HERE'S THE ORIgINAL:

HERE'S AN UPDATE:

 

[tosin]

dont see the cover...but what i see i i dont like....

 

[THIZZLAMIC408]

I cant see the original,but if its the same one that you posted before it is an improvement but it still weak.

 

[Majikal Ent.]

Im not feeling it either..

 

[EDJ]

WELL,
IT'S OBVIOUS YAW DON'T LIKE IT. WHAT YAW HAVE FAILED TO DO IS PROVIDE COUNSEL FOR IMPROVEMENT. SO WHAT WOULD YOU DO DIFFERENT TO IMPROVE IT?

 

[EDJ]

BY THE WAY, I KNOW I STILL HAVE TO CLEAN IT UP.

 

[Likwid]

Looks cheap. The bevels and pics especially...No offense, but aren't you the dude always talking down on peoples work?....This is wack.

 

[EDJ]

^LOL. I NEVA TALK DOWN UNLIKE MOST OF YOU CHILDREN. I CRITIQUE AND PROVIDE WAYS TO IMPROVE(WHAT YAW FAILED TO DO). AND WHAT BEVELS ARE YOU TALKIN' BOUT? AND HOW DOES IT LOOK CHEAP? WHAT'S THE CHEAP LOOK?

 

[Likwid]

well, take this into consideration.

 

[Y-S]

i'm not really feeling it man

 

[EDJ]

THANKS LIKWID. WHAT YOU THOUgHT WAS A PAgE CURL IS PART OF THE SAME BEVELED THANg YOU DIDN'T KNOW WHAT IT WAS. IT'S MY LOgO. I PROBABLY SHOULD ROTATE THAT AND MAKE IT FIT MORE IN WITH THE BAK BORDER. THAT FOO' IS ON A CELL PHONE, BUT THAT SHOULDN'T BE A FOCUS. AND I AgREE THAT BORDER WAS NOTHIN' BUT A BRUSH WITH EFFECTS. WHAT WOULD YOU DO TO BRINg IT OUT? I HAVE SO MANY IDEAS FOR THAT BUT I DON'T KNOW WHAT I WANT TO DO EXACTLY WITH IT, THUS ME PUTTIN' IT UP HERE. N-E IDEAS? I'LL RE-UP THE NEXT VERSION ONCE I gET MORE FEEDBAK.