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Apr 25, 2002
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Like a horse race, your behind me when i'm kiccin up dust//
I got cannibalism in my brain, scavanger for piccin up guts//
Have ya hoe liccin my nuts, ya feel me cuzzin//
Fuck solo verses i spit by the dozen, mine be makin' sense and your doesnt//
Hard on your dome i give ya concussions, its juss my charm//
Your unarmed, bout to get harmed, god damnit muthafucka sound the alarm//
Listen up for i started rhyming to show who i became//
BIGGZ i'm shinnin' the name, now i'm climbin' the game//
My pipe and bong add the chronic are my soul mates//
Daily ritual, high times individual i smoke a bowl to an eighth//
I got my DANKster eyes, knowin bout my crew, we wise//
Throwin up my set... blast the techs for the GANGster prize//
I'll tell ya bitch to WAIT aint no DATE her pussy bout to meet its FATE my cock is HEAVYWEIGHT//
Dont DEBATE words i CREATE steppin to the PLATE never WAIT soon to be GREAT//
Its Bay Area affiliation, we hopin to be worldwide, we got determination//
We aint gettin no appreciation, Let it be known in the nation//


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Stealth

Join date: May '98
May 8, 2002
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I thought the first half was real real good...but when you got to the WAIT DATE rhymes...from there on out...it was just alright. but i loved the first part. keep it up.
 
Apr 25, 2002
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@ J-Law you know it dawg...

@soak-game... good shit pimpin'. thanx for feedbacc

@Cel.. gracias dawg..

@babygirl... holla boo. thanks for peepin it...

@tank.. fill me in on what you seen that was better.... thanks for peepin tho....
 
Apr 26, 2002
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the shit u put up in battle against me was better as well as ur week 4 battle and ur "know knowin"....this was a allright verse i just like those other ones better