lil verse

[gonza1]

just praticing a lil verse tell me wut u think good or bad and wut not

http://www.zshare.net/audio/160305023f250765/

 

[Rusto]

pretty good. Work on your timing though. It sounded like you were struggling to stay on beat

 

[gonza1]

i was lol i never can stay on beat i dont kno how i got tight rap wit out beat but like ill just bust but i cant do it wit a beat

 

[PoLLo LoC831]

dats a tight ass beat i would rip it up