LIL LUCKY THIZZ LATIN R.I.P MAC DRE

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recklessofgilaz

recklessofgilaz

Im Gay until I log back in
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Gilaz with Track Killa and Vince
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recklessofgilaz

recklessofgilaz

Im Gay until I log back in
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Oct 30, 2008
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Gilaz with Track Killa and Vince
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just listened to this and to tell you the truth bro I didn't like it. not only because you re-used the beat to one of my top 5 favorite Notorious B.I.G. songs ever (songs a classic by itself no need to make different versions of classic records. that be like redoing Biggies "Juicy" song just dont do it!) but because of the lack of lyrical ability (rhyming the word "face with face") but your delivery is not good at all. It sounds like your just reading it from paper instead of taking the time to practice your verse and work on the delivery of it to make it sound cleaner. also what you talk about in the song is not very intreresting and to the average rap consumer its not very appealing to have a house with roaches in the couch and very contradicting to say your in Lucky's house and you name is lucky but the reality from what you present is the contrary. not saying im the best rapper cause im not. I can name 5 better rappers off the top of my head right now, but Im just giving you some constructive critism and my advice to you is work on your delivery, lyrics, get some good production and dont use industry beats, also as it has been stated before BE HUMBLE. Its good to be cocky but not so much where you make claims that your the best Latin Rapper. One last thing...If You Dont have Biggie on the track or 112 on the hook DONT REUSE THAT BEAT! best of luck to you wish you much success
 
DFresh77

DFresh77

Sicc OG
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recklessofgilaz said:
just listened to this and to tell you the truth bro I didn't like it. not only because you re-used the beat to one of my top 5 favorite Notorious B.I.G. songs ever (songs a classic by itself no need to make different versions of classic records. that be like redoing Biggies "Juicy" song just dont do it!) but because of the lack of lyrical ability (rhyming the word "face with face") but your delivery is not good at all. It sounds like your just reading it from paper instead of taking the time to practice your verse and work on the delivery of it to make it sound cleaner. also what you talk about in the song is not very intreresting and to the average rap consumer its not very appealing to have a house with roaches in the couch and very contradicting to say your in Lucky's house and you name is lucky but the reality from what you present is the contrary. not saying im the best rapper cause im not. I can name 5 better rappers off the top of my head right now, but Im just giving you some constructive critism and my advice to you is work on your delivery, lyrics, get some good production and dont use industry beats, also as it has been stated before BE HUMBLE. Its good to be cocky but not so much where you make claims that your the best Latin Rapper. One last thing...If You Dont have Biggie on the track or 112 on the hook DONT REUSE THAT BEAT! best of luck to you wish you much success
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really? I ain't reading all that shit..

all you had to do was tell him "YO LIL LUCKY, YOUR SHIT IS WACK. REPOLISH YOUR WORDPLAY OR STOP RAPPING" .

as simple as that..
 
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