i finally got my shit to record...this is a lil i wrote a few days ago...can i get some feedback...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/kavie_music.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/kavie_music.htm
lil 16 bar verse...
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the quality of your vaocals is pretty damn tight.... The beat isn't something that im feeling right off the bat, your flow is smooth but im not feeling that whisper style of rap... but the shit sounds hard, and sounds like u made this beat by yourself.... it's pretty good in sound quality, where do u record at.... anyways reply to my joint
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N
i'm gonna be 100% real withu and hopefully you won't be a faggot and catch feelings and talk shit
that beat was horrible, it just dragged on, it didn't make me want to dance, or anything...it sounded like you found the strings on the keyboard, said "That sounds cool" and then just stopped right there...I would skip it immediately if I found it on one of my CDs
and as for the lyrics - you were on beat, and you had a cool pimpish flow...but you weren't talking about shit.
you were dropping the same old rehashed lyrics since 1995 and I don't want to hear that bullshit...people wonder why nobody on the west coast gets love anymore on the east it's because no damn body is creative with the punchlines... think about it - was there ANYTHING lyrically to make an executive go wow that's different what he say? play that again dog....
no it was the same old rehashed gangsta shit that needs to be flushed down the fucking toilet forever.
beat I give a 1 out of 10 cuz at least it didn't have some dumb sample like east coast faggots put in their shit...
and the lyrics I'll give you an 7 1/2 out of 10 for pure flow, and a 0 out of 10 on lyrics...
overall you got raw talent, do your thing and I wish you the best in your future endeavors ...
that beat was horrible, it just dragged on, it didn't make me want to dance, or anything...it sounded like you found the strings on the keyboard, said "That sounds cool" and then just stopped right there...I would skip it immediately if I found it on one of my CDs
and as for the lyrics - you were on beat, and you had a cool pimpish flow...but you weren't talking about shit.
you were dropping the same old rehashed lyrics since 1995 and I don't want to hear that bullshit...people wonder why nobody on the west coast gets love anymore on the east it's because no damn body is creative with the punchlines... think about it - was there ANYTHING lyrically to make an executive go wow that's different what he say? play that again dog....
no it was the same old rehashed gangsta shit that needs to be flushed down the fucking toilet forever.
beat I give a 1 out of 10 cuz at least it didn't have some dumb sample like east coast faggots put in their shit...
and the lyrics I'll give you an 7 1/2 out of 10 for pure flow, and a 0 out of 10 on lyrics...
overall you got raw talent, do your thing and I wish you the best in your future endeavors ...
SHITES LAME GET AT A REAL PRODUCER AND LYRICIST
YO BUT NICCA FUCC THA EAST CAOST IF YAH FOMR THA WEST COAST WHY YAH WANNA DO SHIT LIKE EAST THA REASON EAST DOIN GOOD MY OPINON CAUSE THEY GOT ALL THA FUCCIN MONEY AND LEABELS AND SHIT AND HELLA COMMERICAL AND SHIT THATS WHy TEHY SELLIN THEY NAME RIGHT OF THA BACC IT AINT WE DONT RAP AS GOOD IS KSUT THAT WE AINT AS MAIN STREAM AS TEHY ARTIST
YO BUT NICCA FUCC THA EAST CAOST IF YAH FOMR THA WEST COAST WHY YAH WANNA DO SHIT LIKE EAST THA REASON EAST DOIN GOOD MY OPINON CAUSE THEY GOT ALL THA FUCCIN MONEY AND LEABELS AND SHIT AND HELLA COMMERICAL AND SHIT THATS WHy TEHY SELLIN THEY NAME RIGHT OF THA BACC IT AINT WE DONT RAP AS GOOD IS KSUT THAT WE AINT AS MAIN STREAM AS TEHY ARTIST
N
I live in the east - and I can tell you exactly WHY west coast artists get no love out here...it's because on the east it is all about being CLEVER with bouncy beats...the west is more about being HARD with head noddin beats.
what would you rather hear? an artist that says shit like
"You ain't been dissed that hard since makaveli / nowadays your rappin's way worse than your actin in belly" (clever, diss at nas)
or
"Yo g, I'm gonna kill you, see, and you're gonna get smoked, g / and you don't want to fuck with me, g, cuz you ain't shit, see, I'm a playa, cuz, and I ride til the end, cuz" dumb shit
and what's worse is when artists like C-BO think that people on the east are retarded and want to hear shit about diamonds and pearls...FUCK THAT>..people listen to jigga in SPITE of the fact he raps about that dumb shit, people listen to jigga because he's clever...
when you hear a rapper like c-bo who has no creativity whatsoever ...and add to that all he raps about is lobster and bentleys nowadays you get HORRIBLE shit which nobody wants to listen to.
what would you rather hear? an artist that says shit like
"You ain't been dissed that hard since makaveli / nowadays your rappin's way worse than your actin in belly" (clever, diss at nas)
or
"Yo g, I'm gonna kill you, see, and you're gonna get smoked, g / and you don't want to fuck with me, g, cuz you ain't shit, see, I'm a playa, cuz, and I ride til the end, cuz" dumb shit
and what's worse is when artists like C-BO think that people on the east are retarded and want to hear shit about diamonds and pearls...FUCK THAT>..people listen to jigga in SPITE of the fact he raps about that dumb shit, people listen to jigga because he's clever...
when you hear a rapper like c-bo who has no creativity whatsoever ...and add to that all he raps about is lobster and bentleys nowadays you get HORRIBLE shit which nobody wants to listen to.
i wanna hear shit thats real not sum shit talkin pussies
and niggaz who talkin bout diamonds in tha east thats waht they got they aint livin on tha streets no mo and thats whtat they rappin bout so fucc that shit
and tha west got betta shit then yall all yall doin is samplin old ass beats and do tha same gay shti ova and ova
and niggaz who talkin bout diamonds in tha east thats waht they got they aint livin on tha streets no mo and thats whtat they rappin bout so fucc that shit
and tha west got betta shit then yall all yall doin is samplin old ass beats and do tha same gay shti ova and ova
N
I'm not gonna sit here and diss the west - because i'm a fan of the music...but really, I haven't heard any creativity come out of the west in years except for that rass kass shit and that's faggot shit pharcyde dilated ppls garbage
but west coast artists are picking up east coast bad habbits, rapping about diamonds and crystal and lobster...
and what's better - a sampled old 70's record going "oh boy oh boy" or 89 tracks of strings?
I'll give it to you - east coast is mostly fake...NORE used to chill around where I live now - in the suburbs, and he used to be flat fucking broke and ppl used to clown...
if someone from the west showed REALISM, and INGENUITY ...there'd be no stopping
but west coast artists are picking up east coast bad habbits, rapping about diamonds and crystal and lobster...
and what's better - a sampled old 70's record going "oh boy oh boy" or 89 tracks of strings?
I'll give it to you - east coast is mostly fake...NORE used to chill around where I live now - in the suburbs, and he used to be flat fucking broke and ppl used to clown...
if someone from the west showed REALISM, and INGENUITY ...there'd be no stopping
i feel you on that...but me personally...i'm only 16 and i'm rappin about what i know and what i've been through...i'm not tryin to come through wit bouncy beats...i'm tryin to come through wit shit that make my lyrics song tight...and as for you feedback, i appreciate you bein honest...i know that the beat for that "Judgement Night" track (if thats the one you were referin to) was shitty, but thats the first beat that i had ever made (i'm only usin a keyboard, no beat machines)...and as far as the lyrics, this is what comes to me when i sit down to write...if somebody doesn't like it they ain't gotta listen to it (no disrespect toward you)...but anywayz, i apreciate you your honest feedback...thanx...and peace...