Let me get yall's feedback on the homie's work

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peeped out Soreal and this is my thoughts

Lyrically he is above average, delivery is on point but could improve, vocal tone is one point but song could have been mixed better...beat is bonkers, real smooth

dude is about average....has potential...he should continue pursuing music

A COLLABORATION WITH MOESES SOULRIGHT WOULD BE A WISE MOVE !!!!!
 
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peeped out Soreal and this is my thoughts

Lyrically he is above average, delivery is on point but could improve, vocal tone is one point but song could have been mixed better...beat is bonkers, real smooth

dude is about average....has potential...he should continue pursuing music

A COLLABORATION WITH MOESES SOULRIGHT WOULD BE A WISE MOVE !!!!!
Good lookin out DN on peeping it and sharing your thoughts, Ima pass along feedback!
 

0R0

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Lyrically he's solid but something about his delivery and mic presence is off to me. Needs more oomph if that makes sense lol. You gotta try to captivate people with those lyrics, his voice and delivery is kind of average and you would expect him to be spitting some playa rap type shit. Tell him to keep at it tho.

Also your sig was too distracting first time I came in here ez-roo, straight forgot why I came in here and went to your random thread lo.
 

Mac Jesus

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I haven't listened to the song yet, but don't listen to anything 0R0 just wrote. I know I did not even bother to read it. 0R0 is a 90s baby FYI. He listens to Lil Wayne, and still plays with toys in the bathtub.
 
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Lyrically he's solid but something about his delivery and mic presence is off to me. Needs more oomph if that makes sense lol. You gotta try to captivate people with those lyrics, his voice and delivery is kind of average and you would expect him to be spitting some playa rap type shit. Tell him to keep at it tho.

Also your sig was too distracting first time I came in here ez-roo, straight forgot why I came in here and went to your random thread lo.

Thats wussup brethren, good lookin and ya being his first album he still lookin for his voice/delivery style. But this is all good to know for the next project!
 
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I haven't listened to the song yet, but don't listen to anything 0R0 just wrote. I know I did not even bother to read it. 0R0 is a 90s baby FYI. He listens to Lil Wayne, and still plays with toys in the bathtub.
lol not the toy's in the bathtub.