Just some lyrics

[Lil Oso XIV]

I done drank all that shit up in my flask
now im fitted in black wit my freddy krueger mask
and blades on my fingers to match
14 inch gash
when my razors begin to slash a scrap in half
no need for a gat to blast
to make you part of the past
real soldiers ready to smash
hope in my ride and mash like a dash 4 the cash
im infested wit the siccness thats spreading like a rash
a new bread of killas has hatched
on the door to life and death i pull the latch
im a crazy psycho skitzo n i aint ever meet my match
im a sinnen screamin demon all about my scratch
im out of my remedy, caldron, potion so i need to brew up another batch
whatd you hear last, my demonistic laugh
as i smash off into the darkness
ever since the beginnin ive had to be heartless
im wonderin how out of my family ive made it the farthest
without becoming a decayed carcuss
you wanna be fuckin with me n your gonna be learin your not the smartest
Your fuckin wit a killa thatll rip out your heart
then tear the rest of your body apart
its been my mentality since the start
Run your ass of the road like mario cart
your ass is nothin but a mark
with more sugar than a sweet tart
ive gotem feelin my lyrics like they feelin the bass
you wanna be frontin n ill be rippen the smile right off of your face
even your familys talkin about how your nothin but a disgrace
im gonna be leavin your minds erased
not wit a gat but wit the j that i laced
Now yall have copped a piece of the mentality that ive embraced

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

Tell me what yall think if its good or weak

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

Scraps get the dissmiss
with the 186
off my hitlist
im off the hinges
when i spit this
lyrical siccness i come so sick
siccer than poligamist
mf try n catch up but i leavem up in the mist
as i painty the picture quicker than a muralist
i only handle my biz in real life
so to all you scraps this is my one and only diss
I floss ball till i boss
scrappas step up n get tossed
your homies steppin up to me than its goin to be your loss
hope our paths dont cross
cruizin throiugh my side you must be lost
ive earned my stripes n paid my cost
so one last time fuck lil rob, mrs shadow, knightowl, n kid frost
Im still spitten sinnen n dissen this is only the beginnen
yall be knowin how we be liven to be labeled the un4given
Scrap killin cap peelin blood spillin
more than willin psycho feelin
its that pistol concealin drug dealin northen villain
posted up with the homies chillin
so many scrappas shits about to hit the cealin
Whats up with scraps bitchin then snitchen
Its a fact, besides that no scraps make it past my mini mack
I got all the camaradas watchin my back
Lil robs a bitch, n will get bitch smacked
califa thugs they get no luv
nothin but slugs up in they mug
Royal t ill leave face down in a puddle of blood
and i dont give a fuck who your clicka thought it was
This one goes out to some more of you bitchs down sewer claimin bi power
you bitchs n levas are nothin but cowards
softer than petals on a flower
ill give you putos the golden shower
come see me anyday any hour
your hardest soldados will get douvoured
Oh no, here comes another grand slam
fuck the sewer lado and latino jam
hit you levas wit a back hand
We all know capones
the first real leva that ever touched the microphone
no need to be pullin my chrome
to be splittin your dome
im more than willin to be bustin your bones.

 

[murderman]

your rhyme goes on way to fuckin long homie... unless you spit that shit quick as fuck you need to stop the continuous flow.. other than that shits dope

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

cool man, thanks for the advice, your write its heard to flow that many rhymes, but yeah that how i spit hella fast cuz thats my style. ill post up more later.
ive been postin my flows on the east coco thread, until i saw this. ill post up some my older ones.

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

WE LIVE IN A WORLD OF SIN AND DEATH
IT BECAME EVEN WORSE WITH THE INTRODUCTION OF METH
IT GETS A HOLD OF THE BEST
AND TURNS THEM IN THE WORST
ITS WORSE THAN A CURSE
AND IT CANT BE CURED BY GOIN TO CHURCH
WHAT HAPPENED TO SMOKIN THE REEFER
GETTIN STRAIGHT FADED OFF OF THE CREEPER
THIS SHITS HITTEN THE NATION HARDER THAN A STRAIGHT SWEEPER
TAKIN 1 HIT OF IT IS LIKE HANDIN YOUR SOUL
OVER TO THE GRIM REAPER
TO MANY ITS WORSE THAN GOLD
BUT ITS TWENTY TIMES CHEAPER
THATS WHY ITS TAKIN OVER OUR NATION
LIKE A WILDFIRE THATS BEEN BLAZIN
AN EPEDIMIC IS WHAT WERE GONNA BE FACIN
ALL BECAUSE OF A LETHAL CHEMICAL COMBINATION
WHATD YOU EXPECT FROM HITLERS CREATION
ITS ONE OF THE GREATEST SENSATIONS
UNTIL YOUR FORCED INTO AN EARLY CREMATION
IT DOESNT MATTTER YOUR LOCATION
BUT BIG CITIES LAYED THE FOUNDATION
NOW ITS TAKEN OVER BODYS LIKE A MUTATION
THATS WHAT HAPPENS
WHEN YOU KEEP THE GLASS DICK IN CONSTANT ROTAION

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

HERE SOME OF MY SHIT SPEAKIN ON THE GOV

HERES ANOTHER FLOW ABOUT SCRILLA
ON THE REALLA ITS AMERICAS #1 KILLA
SLAYIN N TAKEN MORE LIVES THAN A NINE MILLA
WE ALREADY HAVE OUR OWN WAR N AMERICA
RATS N SCRAP KILLAZ, WARRIORS N DRUG DEALAS
THE LABEL USE STREET TERRORISTS
BUT THE GOVS ONLY N IT 4 THE BIGGEST PICH
RIDICULOUS, TAKE US TO WAR OVER OIL
SO THEY CAN BUBBLE, N TURN OUR CONTRY TO TURMOIL
ID BE FIGHTIN BACK TOO IF ENEMIES TRIED TO INFILTRATE MY SOIL
THIS NORTHERNERS ABOUT TO PULL THE SHEETS BACK, UNCLE SAME
SOON YOUR SURRUPT PLANS WILL BE REVEALED THEN FOILED
ITS JUST FACTS, ON EVERYTHING THEIRS A TAX
DOIN WHATEVER THEY HAVE TO DO MAKE THEIR PAPER STACK
WHILE WE MAKE AN HONEST LIVIN BREAKIN OUR BACKS
DRIVEN PEOPLE CRAZY, SHOOTIN EACH OTHER WITH AKZ N MACKZ
THATS WHY THEY RESORT TO BUSTIN BIG MONEY JACKZ
LOOTIN N SHOOTIN STRAPZ
WHILE OTHERS PLAY CARDS N SHOOT CRAPS
IT DOESNT MATTER IF YOUR WHITE OR BLACK
THEYLL THROW YOU IN PRISON
LOCKED N A SYSTEM, GIVEN A NUMBER, BRANDED LIKE CATTLE,
BUT IT DOENT MATTER AS LONG AS THEY GET THEIR DIVIDENDZ,
OUT OF THEM
THEIR THE MODERN DAY SLAVES,
MAKIN WAY LESS THAN MIN WAGE,
HOW DO YOU THINK THE IRON CAGE WAS MADE,
THEY MORE THEY INCARCERATE, THE MORE THEIR PAYD

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

IM ABOUT TO UNLEASH MY RAGE
NO MATTER WHAT THEY DO I CANNOT BE FAZED
TAKE HEED, RISE UP,
AND LEARN ABOUT UNCLE SAMS EVIL WAYS
LIBERALISM IS AGAINST THEY WAY WE WERE RAISED
THEY WANT ME ASSASINATED FOR THESE WORDS THAT I SAY
CUZ MY WORDS HITEM HARDER THAN A TWELVE GAUGE
STRAIGHT TO THE FACE, MY WORDS LEAVE SOME STUNNED N AMAZED
THATS CUZ THEY BLINDED FROM THE REAL SHIT THAT GOES ON EVERYDAY
THEIR TIME WILL COME SO THEY BETTER PRAY
ITS ALL GONNA COME BACK ON THEM FOR USING US AS THEIR MAINSTAY
EVIL ASS WAYS, THE MEDIA FEEDZ OUR PEOPLE NOTHIN BUT LIES
PROTECTING THE SYSTEM FROM THEIR VICIOUS CRIMES
THATS WHY I SHOW NO REMORSE WHEN I LET THE BULLETS FLY
THEYLL LIE TO YOUR FACE WHILE THEY LOOK YOU N THE EYES
A PERSON LOCKED N THE PEN TO THEM THAT IS A PRIZE
N THIS CRAZY ASS WORLD ITS HARD ITS HARD TO SURVIVE
ESPECIALLY WHEN YOUR ALREADY LIVIN A CRAZY LIFE
THEY JUST WANT TO SEE US SUFFER N FRY
NEVER SHOW REMORSE WHEN THEY MAMAS CRY
ITS HARD TO EXPLAIN THAT THEIR SON WAS AN EVIL CURRUPT INDIVIDUAL
EVEN THOUGH THEY SAY THE SAME ABOUT US, SO THE FEELINZ ARE MUTUAL
I GOTTA HITEM SO CRITCAL, PULLIN THE SHEETS BACK, LYRICAL

 

[Ironic Commando]

terrible

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

^^^^
BWAHAHAHA, THANK YOU FOR YOUR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIZIZM, BITCH

 

[Ironic Commando]

my pleasure, faggot

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

GO BATTLE LEE.

 

[ovarbmu]

your rhyme goes on way to fuckin long homie... unless you spit that shit quick as fuck you need to stop the continuous flow.. other than that shits dope

kinda what i was thinkin^...but its cool dog..nice lil spit...well not really little lmao...peep my new freestyle diss

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

Here comes another flow off the tip of my mind
im about to create another rhyme
ilke a dopefiend doin another line
or blowin a puddle
like tecca nina im about to bubble
in the middle of a struggle
im about to make my paper double
mobbin around in a buick regal
im flyin higher than a seagul
im so illegal im evil like the devil
but im comin on another level
i was born to be a rebel
like i was bumpin heavy metal in the ghetto
with my foot on the pedal
im headed for disaster
like droppin a sculpture made out of plaster
im makin these hits that are bumpin in your ghetto blaster
When your steppin up on the scene
your seein nothin but grinnen and hearin nothin but laughter
But when they see me comin they better be runnin
cuz im gonna be gunnin
ever since the beginen
ive been into somethin
you aint about nothin
when you talkin you bluffin
you better get your family, brothers, sisters, n cousins
I aint ever showin no lovin im gonna be buckin
it takes all of my composure to keep me from aimin up at your head
an fillin it up with lead my panos red
im th one thats known for leavin enimigos dead
so you better not get caught slippen
if you wanna be liven
cuz id rather be kickin back blazin

 

[theflatz707]

yur rhymes are hella simple

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

^^^^
THANKS MAN, ITS YOUR OPINION, PUT TO ME THIS ISNT SIMPLE.

THATS WHY ITS TAKIN OVER OUR NATION
LIKE A WILDFIRE THATS BEEN BLAZIN
AN EPEDIMIC IS WHAT WERE GONNA BE FACIN
ALL BECAUSE OF A LETHAL CHEMICAL COMBINATION
WHATD YOU EXPECT FROM HITLERS CREATION
ITS ONE OF THE GREATEST SENSATIONS
UNTIL YOUR FORCED INTO AN EARLY CREMATION
IT DOESNT MATTTER YOUR LOCATION
BUT BIG CITIES LAYED THE FOUNDATION
NOW ITS TAKEN OVER BODYS LIKE A MUTATION
THATS WHAT HAPPENS
WHEN YOU KEEP THE GLASS DICK IN CONSTANT ROTAION

TO ME THOSE ARENT TOO SIMPLE

 

[Lil Oso XIV]

I JUST WROTE THIS N UNDER 10 MINUTES, N THATS ON EVERYTHING

YOU KNOW WHEN YOU COME TO ME FOR THE GOODS THE PRICE IS RIGHT
CHILLIN WITH A BARKER BEAUTY ON MY SIDE
AND HER SNATCH IS TIGHT
LIKE MY GAME ON THE LATE NIGHT....CREEP
I MAKE SURE NONE OF THESE FIENDS SLEEP
CUZ I GOT THE REMEDY
THAT GIVES THEM THE POWER TO BE
AN IMMORTAL ENTITY
WHILE IM KICKIN BACK COLLECTIN CURRENCY
TILL MY STATUS REACHES BALLER
IF U NEED ME JUST HOLLER
IM CRAZY LIKE DAHMER
N THIS CRAZY WORLD ITS ALL ABOUT THE MIGHTY DOLLER
BUT ILL NEVER SELL OUT ON MY HOMIES
NOTHINS BETTER THAN CHILLIN DRINKIN FORTIES
FUCKIN WITH ALL OF THE LADIES
FRONTEM FOR 14 HOURS,
BITCHS BETTER PAY ME
B4 YOU SEE ME GO REALLY CRAZY
IM ALL ABOUT MY FERRY
FUCK WITH IT IT BECOMES DEADLY
YOU BETTER GET READY
CUZ IM GETTIN A GRIP N IM KEEPIN IT STEADY
LIKE MY HOLD ON THIS GAME
THAT IM HITTIN HARDER THAN A BULLET TO THE BRAIN

 

[DankedOut707]

I JUST WROTE THIS N UNDER 10 MINUTES, N THATS ON EVERYTHING

YOU KNOW WHEN YOU COME TO ME FOR THE GOODS THE PRICE IS RIGHT
CHILLIN WITH A BARKER BEAUTY ON MY SIDE
AND HER SNATCH IS TIGHT
LIKE MY GAME ON THE LATE NIGHT....CREEP
I MAKE SURE NONE OF THESE FIENDS SLEEP
CUZ I GOT THE REMEDY
THAT GIVES THEM THE POWER TO BE
AN IMMORTAL ENTITY
WHILE IM KICKIN BACK COLLECTIN CURRENCY
TILL MY STATUS REACHES BALLER
IF U NEED ME JUST HOLLER
IM CRAZY LIKE DAHMER
N THIS CRAZY WORLD ITS ALL ABOUT THE MIGHTY DOLLER
BUT ILL NEVER SELL OUT ON MY HOMIES
NOTHINS BETTER THAN CHILLIN DRINKIN FORTIES
FUCKIN WITH ALL OF THE LADIES
FRONTEM FOR 14 HOURS,
BITCHS BETTER PAY ME
B4 YOU SEE ME GO REALLY CRAZY
IM ALL ABOUT MY FERRY
FUCK WITH IT IT BECOMES DEADLY
YOU BETTER GET READY
CUZ IM GETTIN A GRIP N IM KEEPIN IT STEADY
LIKE MY HOLD ON THIS GAME
THAT IM HITTIN HARDER THAN A BULLET TO THE BRAIN

U CAN TELL U WROTE IT IN LESS THEN 10 MINUTES BRUH

 

[theflatz707]

right, tight, creep, sleep, baller, holler, dollar, deadly, ready, steady

thas wut im talkin bout when i sed simple those rhymes are hella easy

 

[CESARE BORGIA]

It's not horrible but it's not great, i would rate it as average because you don't come from an angle that's unique, it just seems plain and the same as everyone else. if you switched up your words with less common used ones it would up the quality of your rhymes.